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Posted by
on Monday, February 20 @ 08:28:59 UTC
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: My Thoughts, His Whispers(a poem within a poem)
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on Monday, February 20 @ 08:28:59 UTC
CJHeck writes:: " Warm breath
and whispers
Sweet, sweet woman,
in my ear
waking up
my forever darling,
more than
my mind.
I’ve never been
Love’s arrows
pierce through
so happy.
dreams, slice
through sleep fog,
I’ve never known
arousing the her-parts,
soft as a sigh,
such love.
yet fast as a
hummingbird’s wings
I now know
and once awake,
passion takes hold of
the purpose of
...my life.
"
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Re: My Thoughts, His Whispers(a poem within a poem) (Score: 1)
by Black_Crimson on Monday, February 20 @ 17:43:41 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I find it interesting with two poems intertwiend together. It could have a better flow, but was good. I liked it.
-Missy
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