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: The Gift
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on Saturday, April 01 @ 13:54:20 UTC
teardrop writes:: " He came to me
was here last night
held my hand
swore it would be alright.
With soft spoken words
and deep trust in his eyes
he spoke of a place
where serenity lies.
Promising to help
guide the way
said he'd be back
for a visit today.
I finally spoke up
for I desired it bad
my soul was aching
for this peace he had.
With such a beautiful gift
I asked why to me he came
he replied, "I am your angel
and Death is my name."
"
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Re: The Gift (Score: 1)
by algoressister (algoressister48@yahoo.com) on Sunday, April 02 @ 09:31:40 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Hi,
I like this....it has a nice pace and the whole is integrated. I feel left with a question....I don't know if it is for you or me....will see....ttfn Laurel |
Re: The Gift (Score: 1)
by Black_Crimson on Sunday, April 02 @ 21:39:45 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I really like this, a very good flow through the whole poem, gets you thinking one thing at the beginning and ending with something totally different. LIke the perspective you used. Keep writing.
-Missy |
Re: The Gift (Score: 1)
by syloss (syloss1@yahoo.com) on Tuesday, April 04 @ 01:04:46 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | This was good. It had me going ‘till the end. Thank you, James |
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