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on Monday, May 22 @ 14:17:45 UTC
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: Loves Curse
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on Monday, May 22 @ 14:17:45 UTC
Penguindave writes:: "
Living without you is heartache,
Every day that goes by means nothing to me,
I have no care for this life I am leading,
Nor care for the blue skies nor sunshine I see,
All of my world feels consumed,
By the pain that weighs on my weakening heart,
No interest in all that surrounds me,
As day passes day I keep falling apart,
Not much of me left, just remains,
Confounded by sadness and swallowed by fears,
I fade away in my sorrows,
That slip through my fingers upon every tear,
I think of you on every second,
When I'm alone and you're not in my day,
I praise you for all you have given,
Then I curse you for all you have taken away, "
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Re: Loves Curse (Score: 1)
by Black_Crimson on Monday, May 22 @ 21:35:58 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I love the last couple lines-"i praise you for all you have given, then I curse you for all you have taken away". At one time in my life, i felt the exact same way. The constant tug at your heart of losing someone just never seems to go away. Keep writing, this was good, and through time things will get better, that is something that has taken me awhile to learn, but it is true.
-Missy |
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