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Metaphorical
Posted by on Friday, June 16 @ 23:57:54 UTC

: Poeticaly Yours
on Friday, June 16 @ 23:57:54 UTC
moose writes:: "

By the candel light I write this to you
My last letter to appologize with
Too much I've wadded through to get to you
And I realized it wasn't worth it
You killed me with the sparkle in your eye
And you shot me down when I tried to fly
I feel so dead right now for drowning in my love for you
The only one to save me now is God
So I pray to him tonight before I burn my notes and stories
That maybe someday you will see the heart you stole from me
Too much I've wadded through to get to you
And I realized it wasn't worth it
You killed me with the sparkle in your eye
And you shot me down when I tried to fly
I feel so dead right now for drowning in my love for you
I feel so dead, I feel so dead... "


 
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Re: Poeticaly Yours (Score: 1)
by suv_rockz (goldensuv@yahoo.com) on Sunday, June 18 @ 03:46:14 UTC
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WOW!!!!! i felt i just HAD to comment after reading this coz its soooo beautifully written..the picture that it creates...WOW...im speechless..dont know what to say...all i can say is WOW!! Amazing,beautifully written.loved it!


Re: Poeticaly Yours (Score: 1)
by BiasedSecret on Sunday, June 18 @ 23:30:02 UTC
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This was beautiful I especially like the repitition you included in the poem the emphasise your point.
You conveyed your emotions quite well.
Thanks for the read


 
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