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Romance
Posted by on Thursday, October 26 @ 21:40:34 UTC

: For A Second (Forget)
on Thursday, October 26 @ 21:40:34 UTC
dreameyes writes:: " i'm sick and tired of all your childish games
this has to stop and someone was take the blame
i can't keep giving evrything i have inside
when all my true emotions do is hide
until you finally decide
that you want to be with me
at first you said babe, take it slowly
but it's been a good minute
it's hard to tell whether your whole heart is in it
i'm about to die of fatigue
because i'm still running for a love that i don't need
this is part of my life i surely will live to regret
so don't you ever for a second forget.....

i'm in this relationship too
it isn't always all about you
i have my needs as well
yet i go through hell
we need a resolution
we need to find a solution
i want you to know
i'm ready for you to go
it's been past time for you to leave
for as far as i can see
this isn't the right type of love for me...... "


 
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Re: For A Second (Forget) (Score: 1)
by xtourneyx on Thursday, October 26 @ 22:26:20 UTC
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I really appreciated this piece.
You cans ee the emotion as well as a story unfolding that keeps the reader intrgued until the last line.

You should check spelling though because some lines don't work as well and I"m not sure if its because you mistyped words (thus making them other words) or thats just how you wanted it

good job!


 
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