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on Thursday, July 19 @ 22:02:09 UTC
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: Pieces of Me
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on Thursday, July 19 @ 22:02:09 UTC
black_crimson writes:: " It has taken years
to complete all these pieces
connecting together a life
of moments,
times that are ever changing
from the innocence of a childhood
to the difficulties of teen acceptance
an intricate process
of a growing personality
fitting in the ups and downs
of real life,
then in just a moments time
after life seems to be alright
change-
brings a frame of shattered pieces
among finding
the missing piece
of an uncontented soul,
lack of true innocence
brings a fall
through struggles of finding hope
and a place to belong,
slowly in heartbreak
scattered life lessons
come together
and the meaning of who I am
is more clear
I pick up the pieces of my soul
and put together a life I want to hold
but still waiting...
searching for something real
in the days of young adulthood
the missing piece of love
remained a question to my heart
until that one day
when I became whole
and marriage completed
the siloutte of who I really am
happiness now lives in this life
where sorrow and pain
once hid,
all these moments
of mistakes
and all the experiences
of life
brings to me a complete piece
of a working art-
a story that will grow
in the contentment of my soul
of connecting together
a life of moments
-MM-7/16/07
This poem is dedicated to all the moments and the pains ive gone through in finding myself and finding true love. In some ways I feel ive wasted time writing about someone who doesnt even matter, because someone else stole my heart and will have it forever, I finally found my happiness and this poem gives the story. "
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Re: Pieces of Me (Score: 1)
by Longfellow on Monday, July 23 @ 06:09:48 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Melissa,
I've been off this site for some time and have just now read your last 5 or 6 pieces. It is like night and day, the difference from those earlier works. I'm very happy for you. Whatever has made the difference, tell him to keep it up.
Nice reading you again, much nicer,
Sandy |
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