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Posted by on Friday, April 25 @ 01:07:55 UTC

: before you i fall humble
on Friday, April 25 @ 01:07:55 UTC
darkdream writes:: " your love is unrestricted
yet you find ways to weave in constrictions
your words are contradictions
they dont comply to your true intentions
you mean well by me
as far as mine eyes can perceive
but my heart keeps telling me something is wrong
ive been waiting for this revelation for so long




but until then i yield my presence before you
i will remain loyal and true
a prisoner to the ties that bind
promises that were made when i was so blind
now it's to late
for me to even contemplate
on how to confront this new ordeal
i love to love you but i hate how it feels
to know, that im reaching the end of my rope
so this is where it stops
this is where it will end
this journey will begin
to seek out what you've been holding in
release your true feelings for me
if not then just turn around and leave
i dont need your falsehood
my attempts have been misunderstood
i made advances at our future
thought you were my saviour
to bring me indefinite bliss and rapture
my felicity and docile dreams
have been raided by these thoughts that creep
in and out of my head
im tossing and turning in bed
with these thoughts of us
they start boiling my blood and,
burning my hands and,
redirecting my plans
tugging on my soul
it just wont let it go
until i find out the truth
are you here for me, as i am here for you?


"


 
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Re: before you i fall humble (Score: 1)
by Faithfully_a_Wallflower on Thursday, May 15 @ 16:38:22 UTC
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I especially enjoyed this poem. This is my first comment in a long time because I haven't felt it necessary to comment, but I liked this a lot. It kind of tells an emotional story the entire way and then ends with that always important question...that mysterious wondering about whether the object of your affection cares the same way you do too. Nice job.


 
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