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: How Could You Hurt Me So?
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on Tuesday, December 09 @ 17:10:38 UTC
kaytee606 writes:: " Sometimes I wish I never met you,
So I could say goodbye to all my pain.
We've had a good relationship,
Why would you want to turn it around?
I sit up at night and always cry,
Wondering where you are,
Wishing you were holding me tight.
You lied to me and I forgave,
I trusted and I believed in you.
Then on day, it happened again.
How could you hurt me so?
I love you so much it hurts sometimes,
Wishing I could go back.
Back to the day that we first met,
To skip my regret.
I'm sorry for all that I've done,
But two wrongs don't make a right.
I wish we could start over,
To do things right this time.
Maybe then I won't wonder all the time,
How could you hurt me so?
hmmhk cd "
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Re: How Could You Hurt Me So? (Score: 1)
by LadieLeeisThee on Monday, March 15 @ 20:22:43 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | wow this is really good....i totally relate to this poem....me and my bf went through the same things and we brokeup cause he cheated on me but this poem is just like something i would write.....ur a great writer keep up the good work....great job....!
Chelseylee |
Re: How Could You Hurt Me So? (Score: 1)
by xxbabyrenxx on Thursday, June 17 @ 20:41:20 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | i love how the story of and struggle throughout your relationship is portayed so clearly via the emotional-whip-lash evident in your reflection. it says/tells alot in a few words....compact n powerful...2 thumbs up! great write! |
Re: How Could You Hurt Me So? (Score: 1)
by Swe3tSorr0w on Sunday, May 29 @ 00:14:10 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Your a GREAT writer, and i can comepletely relate to this poem. Keep it up
~ LaRa |
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Average Score: 4.25
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