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: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY
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on Thursday, April 01 @ 07:51:06 UTC
paula_skyy writes:: " how did you feel
the first time you saw terror in my eyes
did it make you feel enormous
or did it make you want to cry
how did you feel
whenyou touched me inappropriately
did it set you on fire
did it make you feel so much better then me
how did you feel
when i begged and cryed NO
did it make you think twice
or was it all systems go
how did you feel
when you were through
did it make you ill
or was it good for you
tell me DADDY
how did you feel? "
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Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by mclurearomin on Thursday, April 01 @ 10:26:07 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://yahoo.com | This was real and it took a lot of guts to bring it to life. Be strong Girl, you'll live through it again. Don't dwell!!!!!
God bless,
~McLure~ |
wow (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Wednesday, April 07 @ 20:31:38 UTC | | this is a very sad poem! Its one of those make you angry poems!!!!! its like u can feel the pain with you! I know how u feel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by brokenlove on Friday, April 09 @ 23:06:39 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | WOW
i'm speechless
that took a lot of guts. hang in there |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Wednesday, April 14 @ 10:08:25 UTC | | it took alot of gutu to write this,be strong.there are others like you,just reach out |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Sunday, April 25 @ 05:35:37 UTC | | i cant relate to this poem but i think u r very brave to get through it it is a gr8 poem n i tink i wud love to c it published one day in a book stay strong lv c x |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by ToNi on Monday, April 26 @ 07:49:01 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | i have never met my dad in my life although i have three dads lol
my real dad is in jail for raping a little girl
and i somtimes wonder if he'd of stayed would i have been that little girl?
i havent told anyone this before but your poem has influenced me highly
i feel sorry for you but i also feel that now you are a stronger person
i have placed a poem on here about my dad where i let my angur out as much as i could but i couldnt brake the boundary and he won over me again
i would love to break free from the chains i have been placed in by his monstrosity
thank you for this poem it has apealed to me and many others
men like him aren't valued in the world
and they do not deserve our love
love you
toni x x |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy on Tuesday, April 27 @ 00:22:48 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | i speek for all the children when i say VOICES WERE MENT TO BE HERD ~paulaskyy~ |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, April 27 @ 00:25:33 UTC | | amen little girl amen |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by KAZI on Wednesday, April 28 @ 22:20:38 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I really like this poem. I mean, I like all of your poems, but this one is especially striking. It kinda makes me feel ill but in a good way.... Does that make sense??? ...uhm...you know what I mean....It's just THAT good! ^^ |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy on Sunday, May 09 @ 18:07:24 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | The hair on my body is standing up form the pain i can relate to. So scared , so confused and why why. Lov val |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by Rosebud1383 on Sunday, May 16 @ 06:34:05 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Ditto to all that's been said and more. Sad but true. |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by marylinISmyHERO (mesmrized003@cs.com) on Saturday, June 05 @ 22:55:53 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | wow I love how you werent afarid to let the truth out. i know it must of took alot but the way you used your words I think everyone can agree that we all can feel a little of what you have. sad and painful but a good poem |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by GothPrincess595 on Friday, July 16 @ 18:44:32 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | That poem made me feel like it was me. And thats a good thing. when your a poet to have other people imagine it. even thought the situation is terrible. dont ever stop writting
lots of love
kayla
tinkerbell121903@yahoo.com
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Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by biggybird01 on Sunday, August 08 @ 14:15:56 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I really lilke this poem. I think you are a great writer. god bless and peace biggy |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by StrongWisperer on Thursday, August 26 @ 18:52:04 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | WOW. this is so beautifuly raw... don't leave this poem here - take it places! I truely believe that this is an awesome piece (and deeply personal for you). |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by Casinova on Friday, August 27 @ 11:57:55 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Hey, you are really strong for letting this out. I respect people and women like you. |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by raynaldoaramirez on Friday, September 10 @ 16:16:04 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | this is Ray ray the writer of the virus and all i can say is as far as messages go yours was right on girl, keep it up and dont give in and youll reach your one person out there somewhere with your words like i hope to someday. p.s.im so sorry |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, November 04 @ 18:48:00 UTC | it was very sad and we all love it u rule
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Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, November 19 @ 14:44:02 UTC | you are a wonderful woman paula, no wonder u turned out to be a lesbian! it would put so much strain on the less emotional and weaker people (bullies, pikeys etc.)but to get this out in the open, and in such a wonderful written style. you have admirable strength. well done for picking yourself up like this
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Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by Angi on Saturday, January 22 @ 23:42:11 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Amazing. I really admire you. My dad did the same thing to me, but I have never been able to overcome it enough to write about it. Stay strong and stay true.
~Angi |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by stillgogo on Saturday, March 05 @ 02:47:18 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | my silent tears hear yours |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Sunday, March 06 @ 23:19:39 UTC | | wow..that makes me speechless as well...I'm so sorry that happened to you...Everything will get better just hang in there ...You can pull through it all... Any one who goes through it is strong enough to move on... I was raped as a little girl, and now I try helping younger girls who have went through anything similar..Hope all gets better for you ~Shelly |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Friday, March 18 @ 10:57:02 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | my book has just been published by auther house this poem is in it the book is called THE AFTERMATH by paula skyy ask your local book store about it. the book itself has been a healing journey for myself. ive recieved so much support from so many people ,i thank everyone
paulaskyy |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by dia on Monday, September 19 @ 09:13:20 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | i thought this was an awful poem.
you went through a horrible experience, i'm not judging you on that, but the way this was written is just not . . well, good. |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by loveislikepainonarainyday on Friday, August 19 @ 23:25:29 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | great poem! its sooo true. i havent had this experience but my really close friend has. its reallly a sad story.
people come see my poems and comment and vote on them ! thanks |
Re: HOW DID YOU FEEL DADDY (Score: 1)
by diamondz on Thursday, February 22 @ 12:45:32 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | After reading this i respect you and your work.
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