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: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT
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on Friday, May 07 @ 08:50:39 UTC
maria writes:: " FIND A ROPE, TIE A KNOT,
BUT MY BABY, IN HIS COT,
LOCK THE DOOR AND SWITCH THE LIGHT
COS IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT.
HE TOLD ME, THAT HE WOULD,
DO THE THINGS A BOYFRIEND SHOULD,
BUT NOW HES LOST, NOT IN SIGHT,
IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT
MY MOTHERS PISSED, NOTHING NEW,
SHE HAS LET ME DOWN LIKE YOU,
TOO LATE NOW TO PUT THINGS RIGHT,
COS IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT
MAYBE I SHOULD DO IT TODAY,
BUT THERE ARE THINGS I WANT TO SAY,
I REALLY DONT WANT TO FIGHT,
COS IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT.
GOODBYE MOTHER GOODBYE LOVER,
THERE CAN NEVER BE NO OTHER,
WHO'D PUT ME THROUGH THIS HOLE SO TIGHT,
IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT...
........GOODBYE X
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Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, May 07 @ 16:17:03 UTC | This poem is really deep and i kno how u feel cuz there i many of tymes that i wanted to do that .. but u kno wha keep your head up cuz that how am dealing with things right now.. but overall i like your poem and if you would like to contact me email me at
demi1988@yahoo.com
stay strong
Damaris |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 1)
by sbsms8 on Friday, May 07 @ 19:00:58 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | wow yes that is a very deep poem but i liked it and pleez don't do anything like that cuz i know the feeling of wanting to die and it's not a good feeling so stay strong and maybe get some help
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Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy on Saturday, May 08 @ 02:05:42 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | good poem,just so u know nobody is worth takeing your own life over...need to talk email me at
paulaskyy@yahoo.com
im always around~paulaskyy~ |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 1)
by lil_jacquie (lil_jacquie@yahoo.com) on Monday, May 10 @ 01:32:54 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Please remember that after the darkness comes a brand new day, no matter how bad things may seem, its only a moment in time and it will pass...
You have a beautiful gift of writing, please don't put that to waste...
Stay strong, and remember that there are always angels by your side.
lil_jacquie@yahoo.com |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:35:08 UTC | | Love it |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:35:43 UTC | | This is beautiful..Like all your other stuff!! |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:36:53 UTC | I felt like this last year.
I got the help i needed and im ok now |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:37:18 UTC | | STAY STRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:39:04 UTC | | WOW |
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by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:39:42 UTC | | WOW AGAIN |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:40:36 UTC | | IM THERE TOO PLEASE TALK TO ME. REPLY WIT YOUR EMAIL ADDRESS |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:41:34 UTC | PLEASE CALL ME: 004299653211
I WOULD LIKE TO SPEAK TO YOU ABOUT YOUR ATHER WORK AMONGST THIS
RAY |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:41:55 UTC | | STRONG STUFF |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:43:14 UTC | | AMAZING |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:44:26 UTC | | FATAL |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:45:37 UTC | | DO U NEED A FRIEND? |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:46:33 UTC | | if you dont feel like this you have a very sick mind!! |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:48:39 UTC | | wow again |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:49:00 UTC | | need help? |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:49:34 UTC | | whats wrong wit u young people... never happy |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:50:02 UTC | | we r happy..just traumatised! |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:50:29 UTC | Im wit you here, Maria
x |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:52:52 UTC | | thanks for ur beaytiful words |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 04:54:49 UTC | Well done, they all really like your work. You deserve to be happy,
Tom
xxxxx |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 10 @ 05:14:23 UTC | | ???????????????????? |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 1)
by perv (pervoe@thepowerofomnipotence.com) on Saturday, July 24 @ 14:17:34 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://thepowerofomnipotence.com | fucking do us all a favour and do it you self-pitying cunt
i didn't read anymore than the first line but i knew it would be shit from the start |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, April 08 @ 14:54:50 UTC | | *********&&&&&&###################**************I can't belive you guys think this is Poetry! It has feeling and emotion, but everything has feeling and emotion!! Everything the human can think of has mood or sensation! Your thoughts need to be cultivated! Not just smeared unrefined on the paper! All the rest of you who think this is art, your own elementary, crude work shows your belief in this kind of unattractive, dense writing! |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, April 08 @ 20:07:56 UTC | | THIS WHOLE THING IS BULLSHIT!!! ALL OF YOUR POSITIVE COMMENTS EXCEPT FOR 2 WERE BY AN Anonymous PERSON?!? **HEY, ARE YOU WRITING THEM YOURSELF SO THAT PEOPLE MIGHT ACCIDENTLY READ YOUR SUCKY POEMS? I SURE AS HELL WAS FOOLED THAT IS WAS GOING TO BE A GOOD POEM!!! YoU sElF PiTyInG ASS! YOU EVEN MESSED UP WHEN YOU REPLIED WITH YOUR OWN NAME TO YOUR OWN POEM, AND THEN WROTE IT OFF AS YOUR SISTER! WHY WOULD YOU HAVE TO SEND HER ANYTHING IF SHE IS YOUR SISTER??? DID YOU FORGET TO LOG OUT BEFORE YOU MAKE COMMENTS TO YOUR OWN POETRY??? PENDEHOE!!! |
Re: IM GONNA HANG MYSELF TONIGHT (Score: 1)
by BodhiTree (burningbright2@aol.com) on Wednesday, April 20 @ 16:02:28 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Hang? you would want to hang yourself, of all things i wouldnt want would be that, a rope and a place to suspend for all to see. that doesnt sound like a pleasant end for you or someone to find you. then again neither is finding any person who commits suicide.
Ive thought about it and I guess it goes with a coupling of problems. here it seems so trivial to end your life just because of your mom and your x-boyfriend. perhaps there is more to it?
Im sorry. the poem was quite powerful though.
life goes on though and the only way to get better is to make it that way. you control what you can and try to come to terms with those that you cant.
Elinor |
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Average Score: 4.57
Votes: 21
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