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: Why’d You Have to Leave, Why’d you have to go?
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on Wednesday, July 21 @ 11:10:07 UTC
Anonymous writes:: " Why’d you have to leave?
Why’d you have to go?
I really loved you you no
Did u have to tell him?
U wanted to die
You could have asked us
You no you can trust
We could have helped
We would have cared
But then you disappeared
Why’d you have to leave?
Why’d you have to go?
I really loved you you no
You left without a word
You left without a trace
All you did was put a frown on my face
You could of spoke up
And said something was wrong
But now it’s too late, you’re gone
Why’d you have to leave?
Why’d you have to go?
I really loved you you no
You put us threw tough times
The memories we haven’t lost
I no your soul is out there
Waiting for one of us
This is my poem
Saying how much I cared
How much I cared the day you disappeared
So when I see you
Up above
Please just tell me why
Tell me why you wanted to die
I loved you so and still do
I can’t wait till I get to see you
To tell you what you told me
“Write your hurts in the sand and benefits in stone”
"
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Re: Why’d You Have to Leave, Why’d you have to go? (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Wednesday, July 21 @ 13:58:04 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I feel your pain through your poem,which is very good.Im sorry for your loss,it always hurts to loss a loved one,especally someone close.very emotional poem, nice write. |
Re: Why’d You Have to Leave, Why’d you have to go? (Score: 1)
by ChelseyLee on Saturday, July 24 @ 14:21:37 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This was an awesome poem...Every word you said meant something to me...I am so sorry for your loss...you seem strong so I think you and your loved ones can pull through aslong as you have eachother....awesome poem though....
ChelseyLee |
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Average Score: 5
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