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on Friday, July 30 @ 09:28:10 UTC
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: Barbed Hook
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on Friday, July 30 @ 09:28:10 UTC
mikeike writes:: " Today was the worst,
My eyes first greeted by the sting of tears,
Forgotten memories purged from my mind at play,
Your smell, your touch, your soft lips, you,
An expired pain renewed.
My hands shake, my heart aches,
Like a child, the tears drown my speech,
I cannot bear this torture,
A love never spoken, a hook never removed.
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A neglected promise, A sudden need to sit down,
Do you remember what we shared, your caress was so healing,
Your warm breath ran a cold shiver through my body, my breath quickened,
Every touch made my body pull towards you, like a million orgasms at the tips of your fingers,
Your gaze was so deep, I felt so vulnerable,
I could not hold back the tears, your embrace was too beautiful,
I knew you were different from all the rest.
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A perfect match, a sincere honesty,
In only a short time we felt like life-long friends,
Everything was natural, we could say anything,
A difference of age, a sharp bite of reality.
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Today was the worst,
I closed my eyes to push away the tears,
Memories too cherished to forget, too painful to remove,
A first love, a barbed hook.
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Re: Barbed Hook (Score: 1)
by full_of_grace on Tuesday, January 17 @ 14:13:01 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://www.poetrypoem.com/fullofgrace | sorry things had to turn that way. i hope you feel better now.
but other than the emotional part,
the poem u xpressed urself in with such greatfullness and with such vividness, is one of the best ones i hav ever read today. |
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