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The Devil's Song
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on Friday, July 04 @ 00:54:28 UTC
paggy writes:: " They call me the devil,
an absolute personification of evil,
I am here to mystify,
your soul and thoughts that you couldn't justify,
those who pretended to be a saint,
had souls drenched in foul paint
narrow were their feelings ,
malicious their desires,
disliked and overthrown by hatred ,
they had no one to admire,
life was a pain ,lust and pelf drew them insane,
Hypocricy was at its peak ,
jealousy and cowardness made them more weak,
you commited crimes out of desperation,
and became my biggest inspiration,
you stabbed your brothers in the back,
now its high time for your hack,
your evil wishes have started to bend,
the road to hell is meeting your end,
if u still think you are pure,
then my dear human , you are immature !
maturity has retired,
sympathy is no more admired,
repentence is your goal,
surrender me your soul.
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Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, July 18 @ 11:16:41 UTC | | good write. |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, August 29 @ 12:14:53 UTC | | this should have been a song mr paggy |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, October 03 @ 02:13:48 UTC | | was wondering - why would a devil punish anyone that is devilish ? |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Saturday, October 11 @ 01:36:23 UTC | | motivating for a devil |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Saturday, October 18 @ 01:34:01 UTC | | keep up the good work |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by Sdstccruelty on Tuesday, December 23 @ 22:03:13 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | very good |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by Chelseylee on Friday, January 09 @ 15:27:20 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | good job i want to read more of wut u have written. |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, February 10 @ 16:13:41 UTC | | Very well written! :) |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, February 26 @ 19:18:25 UTC | | superb ! |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by fallen_soul on Monday, March 08 @ 11:11:01 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | It seems you don't totally understand some of the words you are using. You talk about maturity but this poem seems a little immature itself. I think you should either write about something you know more about or research what you are writing. Not a bad try though |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by Codgin on Wednesday, March 24 @ 19:51:54 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://codgin.cjb.net | | Intresting, a poem from the point of view from the devil, clever! Nicely wrote and intresting, well done, keep up the good work |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by angelkisss143 on Saturday, July 31 @ 20:50:02 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I agree with fallen_soul, your words don't seem to flow just right... maybe because you're trying to rhyme…I always found that a problem with some of my poems. But it was a good try, keep up the work, and remember not all poetry has to rhyme |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by StrongWisperer on Thursday, August 26 @ 13:12:42 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | This poem stumbles over it's shoe laces with the over extended effort to ryme. BUT from the point of view that you wrote it from- very creative! Perhaps if you took out the maturity idea completely out... "The Screwtape Letters" by C.S. Lewis would be a good read for you. It woulod help you give you a better foundation for this poem. |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by paggy on Wednesday, September 15 @ 22:47:22 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://www.utdallas.edu/~pxa016500 | Well !! this poem was my very first. During those days I had no idea how to write poems. I was of the opinion that poems should rhyme. However, anylit and paradox taught me leasons. Thanks to everyone who have given me such valuable suggestions. I will try to remove all the unwanted things from my work and make it more refined.
paggy |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by CorruptedSpirit on Monday, December 20 @ 09:43:37 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | This poem seems to kind of not flow, although you done a better job than me... The only things i can write is what i feel, I have to write a poem about things that don't really concern me before and it never worked...So on that basis, It's a rather good write =o) |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by maim_me on Monday, January 03 @ 06:43:52 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://amenah.diaryland.com | i liked that a lot!
really!
it was very god.
though there was one part i didn't like...
"then my dear human , you are immature !"
the rest was fucking great!
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Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by waterlotus on Thursday, April 28 @ 20:27:17 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I don't know if I like it. |
Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by diamondz on Monday, July 25 @ 20:50:19 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I feelin' that it's hot
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Re: The Devil's Song (Score: 1)
by frutloopz on Monday, June 20 @ 09:53:23 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Very well writen, heads up to you...please post more! |
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