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on Friday, August 13 @ 12:11:27 UTC
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: LET ME SUCK YOU
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on Friday, August 13 @ 12:11:27 UTC
randy writes:: " On my knees with your cock in my face
This is always my favorite place
Push your cock down my throat
Till my chin feels your scroat
Pump your cock deep inside
Make me feel it as it slides
Let me touch your giant sack
Let me reach around your back
Ill grab your hips
Then lick my lips
And ram it all the way
And slam it down all day
You make me cum with your cock
Especially when you make me suck
I love to taste you liquid load
The way it fills my mouth
There is no equal to this joy
Not even riding my favorite toy...
BY: randy and helen
8-10-04 "
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Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Friday, August 13 @ 13:43:06 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Trash thats what this is,Iwouldnt call it poetry |
Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 1)
by biggybird01 on Friday, August 13 @ 14:27:35 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Forget all those haters your poems are very good.!! |
Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Saturday, August 14 @ 16:49:58 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I already have a poem published and am well versed in many types of poetry.There is such a thing as erotic poetry but it dosnt belong on this site
I suggest you find that type of site and place your writteing where it belongs. |
Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Sunday, August 15 @ 20:07:06 UTC | This is the most hilarious shit I have read on this site......Obviously you didnt know what you were talkin about....or you were good atcollecting info on oral sex......Have fun
peace |
Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 1)
by charmer on Monday, August 23 @ 05:47:58 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | rank, erotic! keep it to yourselves, you dont know who reads this stuff....like me, charmer |
Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Wednesday, September 01 @ 06:40:48 UTC | This is pathetic and sad, it sounds as though it could have been written by giggling 12 year olds. To call it erotic is insulting to genuine erotic literature, this is badly written and not even remotely erotic. If you want a real challenge try submitting your poetry to a site where it has to pass through a board of poets.
This is just toilet wall poetry and not even a good example.
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Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, December 13 @ 16:13:05 UTC | I think that you are all hilarious. I don't know if I like this one or not...I mean, yeah, it's dirty, but hey, you gotta give them credit for rhyming well...lol. I don't know. It was interesting. Hey Paula Skyy, do they have a site dirty enough for these two?
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Re: LET ME SUCK YOU (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, December 20 @ 02:12:55 UTC | | i will suck how long you would like |
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