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: DIRTY ASS FUCK
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on Friday, August 13 @ 12:20:20 UTC
randy writes:: " I need your cunt on my face
You know that is it's rightfull place
I'll let you grind all night dear
If you'll wet me from ear to ear
I'll even suck your tight asshole
If you will suck on my pole
Rest your tits on my gut
While I tongue fuck your butt
I'll fist fuck your pussy hole
While you deep throat my pole
My cock will fill your throat with cum
While you think that you are dumb
For never trying this before
You'll swallow and beg for more
And I will give you all you need
Then fuck your ass till you bleed
And as the blood runs down your crack
WHile you lie on your back
I'll blast a load on your chest
And then you'll know I am the best
BY: randy
8-12-04 "
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Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Friday, August 13 @ 13:39:49 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | This is a pretty nasty poem and you my friend have a pretty big ego.I think if yiu think long and hard you could come up with something better to write about, |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by biggybird01 on Friday, August 13 @ 14:23:53 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | You are really making a name for yourself as the sex freak poetry writer. Good way to be different. We need something else to read about except for love and betrayal. You write Great poems keep it up Randy!! |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by Paula on Saturday, August 14 @ 12:40:28 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) acousticpoetnetwork.com | | There is a place for this type of erotic poetry. I really am not kidding. If that is what you're "AIMING" for. Then you should find the right audience. That is if you really want to write about swallowing and loads. If your not really serious about writing at all, then you should just keep this stuff in your personal journal instead of placeing it on a website like this one. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, September 10 @ 16:03:48 UTC | | i dont see the reason to use the language. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Sunday, October 10 @ 09:17:06 UTC | | this poem is 2 damn funny!1 at da smae time it got me wet!! hehe |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, October 15 @ 22:21:32 UTC | | You may be able to express yourself much more intensely by using words less obscene. I suppose if your vocabulary is limited, this is the best you can do but all the vulgarity is simply unnecessary. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by ToNi on Monday, October 18 @ 04:58:52 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | i love this poem i feel the empathy of the horrniness!
major turn on
reading this poem is better than watchin porn (near enough) true images of jucies flowwing and fast impulses!
sex will never be the same now, i've looked at it in a different perspective thank you!
nice ego,
if you feel so sure and proud of your cock you must have something to brag about love, !
all the best and great sex
love toni x x x |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by CorruptedSpirit on Thursday, October 28 @ 10:55:43 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | This is poetry? Oh dear i am doing it all wrong....Surely this is classed as a poem?! Is it? |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by blovely (blovely@cox.net) on Friday, November 12 @ 16:23:20 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This poem must have come from imbreading because no real women would fall for this shit. No real man would ever try to run game like this!
Might as well say " Let me get in them GUTS"
This shits nuts fools. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Sunday, November 21 @ 10:24:50 UTC | | randy, this is not poetry, but prose. The rhyming is extremely childish, language vulgar and i think you need to go and lose your virginity. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by Orobourus on Tuesday, November 23 @ 15:27:04 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Im going to try very hard to look beyond the fact that this poem is extremely vulgar....
What I think you are trying to do with this scene is show people that sex does not need to be romantisized to be described in poem form....you deflate anyone who reads this and I think you wrote this for shock value.....well, you most certainly shocked me.....
Elinor |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Saturday, November 27 @ 22:14:26 UTC | dude, rock on. but do you always talk like that. read mine (Big Daddy Buck 2) Try writing something else like that dude.
Zach |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, December 02 @ 10:25:54 UTC | | my friend and i think this is absolutely hilarious but it did not get us wet like you other sick fuckin freaks out there!!!!!! You need to find a hobby you pervert!! |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, December 07 @ 16:47:32 UTC | | Dawg...that waz too funny! It did make me think that if the people that didn't like it...why'd they continue to read it after they saw the title...that was a turn on...u r OUTRAGEOUS!!! LOLOLOLOL!!! I'm outta here____---Drag_On85 |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Wednesday, December 29 @ 00:41:10 UTC | | Nicccccccccccccce!!! Sincerly touching i must say... very visual yet im quite disturbed that you may be a realistic mother fucker! |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, February 07 @ 16:53:11 UTC | | You fn suk your poety blows ho |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by BlackWidow on Thursday, February 10 @ 10:48:11 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Are you sure you really want to give a disturbing picture in peoples mind. of blood and sexual bodies.
I would say it is very disturbing and i think you should write it in a less disturbing way e.g:
Dont use such strong language
and dont put disguting pictures into my mind
I really ont like this poem!
sorry! |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, February 11 @ 10:17:45 UTC | | I am a BIG V and i personally think that this poem is funny it didn't make me wet but it surely made me have a change of heart about losing my virginity. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by JDcool (jdcool038@yahoo.com) on Wednesday, March 02 @ 16:16:45 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | i swear to GOD that I fucking commented on this one. Shit. Ok. I first read it a WHILE ago, and I didn't like it only because it was so nasty. Then I grew up, read it again, and realized that it's damn good and has poetic quality to it. It's funny and people should lighten up. I love your cock Randy. HEHE
Jennifer |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by zesta (teeina09@yahoo.com) on Sunday, March 06 @ 10:26:12 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | well boi you have issues!! and it is always a good thing to express it. thats what you did. good job. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by Towenstark on Tuesday, March 15 @ 18:46:08 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | It amazes me that as most of society continues to advance in areas of morality, intelligence and basic respect of his/her fellow man/woman, a segment remains stagnated in a sick, perverted, pathetic state. I ask you Randy...if you were hit by a semi tomorrow, is this the legacy you would like those close to you; (if any unfortunates actually exist), to remember you by? Keep this up and believe me, the only respect you'll receive in life is from those with an IQ lower than yours...and they will be difficult to find. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by funeral_of_hearts on Tuesday, March 22 @ 04:50:43 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | personally, i don't think there's enough writers like yourself that don't really give a f*ck what everybody else thinks and just writes. We really do live in such a tight fisted society who thinks that sex is some big scary word when deep inside every persons inner being they just wanna be called a bitch while they get a good hard bang...
Keep it up man, you got my support! |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, April 07 @ 10:45:39 UTC | | i loved your poem. id rather hear about something real than some 11 year olds idea of love. write more |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by diamondz on Monday, July 25 @ 20:55:15 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This is not a part of written poetry to it's good use.
I think you was writting about a flick and it's clearly
a waste of time. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by Maxim on Sunday, November 27 @ 13:11:36 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | curiosity makes me ask why you wrote it. But sense forces me to ask why you posted it when you could probably guess the response. I don't like the content but the poem itself made me smile. Its very different and i think i like it. But i think i'll check out your other stuff before i commit... |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by Maxim on Sunday, November 27 @ 13:12:09 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | curiosity makes me ask why you wrote it. But sense forces me to ask why you posted it when you could probably guess the response. I don't like the content but the poem itself made me smile. Its very different and i think i like it. But i think i'll check out your other stuff before i commit... |
Strange shock tactics (Score: 1)
by Lee-Civico-Cambell (manfishcake@yahoo.co.uk) on Tuesday, November 15 @ 10:16:37 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This poem (I use the term loosely) is like something I could have written when I was twelve. It is boring, not remotely sexy or erotic and at best vulgar. I'd like to say it was truly shocking, but it wasn't even that. Shockingly bad, yes.
On a positive note, it has got lots of comments and made people talk, so perhaps it has its merits.
I bet this poem was typed with one hand though.
cheers
Lee |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by Shaneyungphat on Saturday, October 08 @ 13:41:43 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I totally respect your right to write about whatever you please. I noticed you used the old eminem method here. Make the poem as shocking as possible to gain publicity. From the looks of it, you accomplished that feat. In my opinion, this work would be much better posted on the wall of a bathroom. |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by thegnet on Monday, January 15 @ 22:29:56 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | U R A Dirty Ass Fuck it's obvious
Go get some for REAL and quite writing about it !!!! |
Re: DIRTY ASS FUCK (Score: 1)
by MEBSR on Tuesday, January 30 @ 03:00:25 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | who do you think you are telling someone to take their "art" elswhere love it or hate it you created it by loving or hating it the more you fight things like this the more you will see randy i applaud you for taking the time to share such cotroversial work with us however the ryming was well a bit fourth grade but it was funny tho i dont think that was what you hoped for well good luck in your future writing enjoy the right to free speech
god bless america |
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