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: U SAY I LIE(please comment)
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on Saturday, August 28 @ 14:43:19 UTC
BIGGYBIRD01 writes:: " U try 2 say I lie,
But you have no proof,
The reason is because I speak the truth,
The way I get treated,
U know it's wrong,
All U have to say is "at least you have a Home!"
A home?
What the Hell is that?
U say its "my Home"
But how do U show it
U treat me like nothin',
I don't get to do a lot at all,
I always stay home with my siblings,
Where am I LIVING?
I don't have a life,
I cry myself to sleep everynight,
On the floor I sleep,
No complaining to U not even a peep,
U say I'm your daughter?
Yeah Right!
How do U show it?
By trying 2 control me?
Go, do what you like!
U know I'll never try 2 question it,
How can I?
U ARE ALL THAT U THINK I HAVE,
Trust me,
All this hurt won't last,
The LORD know that I don't lie,
He knows that this is true,
And between me and you,
We know the truth to,
So look in your heart,
Think of all the things yo've said and don,
I hope you meant it all,
Because when I lay in my bed,
Thinking about you,
I'll never forget what you tried to do !
And everything you put me through!!!! "
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Re: U SAY I LIE(please comment) (Score: 1)
by Casinova on Saturday, August 28 @ 15:12:44 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | You sound like you really are in pain. And again you express it very well. |
Re: U SAY I LIE(please comment) (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Saturday, August 28 @ 16:05:31 UTC | | nice job,keep them comming |
Re: U SAY I LIE(please comment) (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Saturday, August 28 @ 16:30:57 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Raw emotion thats what we have here and I like it very much nice job.~paulaskyy`~ |
Re: U SAY I LIE(please comment) (Score: 1)
by biggybird01 on Saturday, August 28 @ 17:48:57 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | This Poem took a lot of tears. I cried and I think my tears made it a lot better then it was. I really want to thank all of you for your comments they reallly mean a lot to mean. |
Re: U SAY I LIE(please comment) (Score: 1)
by charmer (jazz13697@hotmail.com) on Tuesday, August 31 @ 09:40:29 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | the tears you cried will always stain your memory, but it is the hard times that make us who we are,
im behind you....
Charmer |
Re: U SAY I LIE(please comment) (Score: 1)
by suv_rockz on Friday, September 03 @ 03:44:41 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | this is an amazing poem..was just going thru all urs. this is the first i saw and itz made a MASSIVE impact on me :) Good work! |
Re: U SAY I LIE(please comment) (Score: 1)
by biggybird01 on Friday, September 03 @ 13:22:15 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | THANK YOU ALL FOR COMMENTING ON MY POEM IT REALLY MEANS A LOT TO ME. I UNDERSTAND THAT A LOT OF PPL DON'T LIKE MY POEMS BUT THATS OK. I'LL KEEP WRITING B/C I LOVE TO WRITE. ALL MY POETRY ARE BASED ON TRUE AND ACTUAL EVENTS!! THANK YOU ALL AGAIN |
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