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on Monday, August 30 @ 07:28:22 UTC
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: What the world is waiting for
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on Monday, August 30 @ 07:28:22 UTC
perv writes:: " The slow osmsosis of our kiss,
And we levitate above the crowded nightclub.
Now we are a little higher than the angels
It is a long way to fall.
But we will do so together.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx "
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Re: What the world is waiting for (Score: 1)
by biggybird01 on Monday, August 30 @ 07:33:05 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | You can write the best short Poems I 've ever read on this site. Great Job |
Re: What the world is waiting for (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, August 30 @ 13:00:12 UTC | | ya know its a good poem i agree but you are by far the best poet on this site.i think your head is to big |
Re: What the world is waiting for (Score: 1)
by StrongWisperer (willowchild74@wmconnect.com) on Monday, August 30 @ 13:19:38 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | i'm not quite sure what to think of this haiku - but i like visuals; angels and nightclubs |
Re: What the world is waiting for (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Wednesday, November 10 @ 09:50:07 UTC | I am speechless, really. It was.....sweet.
JDcool |
Re: What the world is waiting for (Score: 1)
by Orobourus (Burningbright2@aol.com) on Thursday, December 16 @ 16:15:07 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Im confused...."what the world is waiting for"?????why? maybe you should find a more appropriate title for this poem.....it seems to be more about romance and giddy exasperation .....has nothing to do with the world unless you honestly think that people are paused in mid hickup to watch you and a lover kiss and be "one".....
the words were strung together well though
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Re: What the world is waiting for (Score: 1)
by syloss (syloss1@yahoo.com) on Monday, January 24 @ 14:52:30 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Perv,
I must say that you are a good writer. Not so much your poetry, but the banter you carry on in the comment section is a superb example of free thinking humor.
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