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: BROKEN PROMISES
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on Tuesday, August 31 @ 03:43:38 UTC
suv_rockz writes:: " As I sit next to the window
A feeling of loneliness takes over
I wait, nervous and anxious
And keep glancing at the door
I'm waiting for the ones
Who promised me they'd come again
But when I look out
I see no one through the window pane
As the clock ticks away
A minute seems like an hour
When suddenly I hear
The brakes of their car
I run to the door
Expecting them to arrive
And wonder, without them
How will I survive?
I realise they didnt ring the bell
Neither did they knock
Realising they weren't there at all -
Time stood as still as a rock.
They better not deny it
It was a promise that they made
Yet I know I'm all alone
And now the world begins to fade
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Re: BROKEN PROMISES (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, August 31 @ 03:48:00 UTC | | Nice one again! Better than what i just read! |
- Thanks by suv_rockz on Tuesday, August 31 @ 03:51:50 UTC
Re: BROKEN PROMISES (Score: 1)
by Dhruv on Tuesday, August 31 @ 03:48:28 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Awesome work, keep it up! |
Re: BROKEN PROMISES (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Tuesday, August 31 @ 11:43:21 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Lots of emotion,lots of pain.keep writeing it helps. |
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