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on Tuesday, August 31 @ 09:24:18 UTC
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: Welcome to paradise.
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on Tuesday, August 31 @ 09:24:18 UTC
funeral_of_hearts writes:: " It's blotting out again.
World's on fire.
Dog's barking in the kitchen.
Abstract and warm.
Ciggarettes are lit as thoughts seem to die.
They crumble in the norm,
sitting in the dust.
Another cork is pulled,
instant antidote for everything.
One house. Three bedrooms,
two point five kids and all mod cons.
Every one of them is empty.
No sense of hope arises
When the only thing before her eyes
that truely makes sense
is "for sale" at number forty four.
Makes another mug of tea.
Now everything is better. "
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Re: Welcome to paradise. (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Tuesday, August 31 @ 11:40:31 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | I really like this one,you did a nice job. |
Re: Welcome to paradise. (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, August 31 @ 13:21:29 UTC | | nice job, nice job |
Re: Welcome to paradise. (Score: 1)
by Orobourus (Burningbright2@aol.com) on Thursday, December 16 @ 16:03:41 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | The diction in this was quite powerful, I like the ordinary set up but in the foreground there's this feeling of trepidation a feeling of being ostrasized and lost....simultaneously wanting nothing more than to be lost, the tea is like a tonic for oblivion.....next stop NOWHERE....
very good,
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