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on Friday, September 03 @ 06:53:18 UTC
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: JESUS YOU ARE A MIRROR
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on Friday, September 03 @ 06:53:18 UTC
Anonymous writes:: " JESUS YOU ARE MIRROR OF GOD
YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL LORD
YOU ARE OURS WE ARE YOURS
YOU WIPE OUR TEARS
YOU KEEP US DEARS
AND ALWAYS NEARS
: WE DELETE OUR FEARS
WHEN WE REMEMBER YOU
WHEN WE SING YOU
THEN YOU RING US
YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL JESUS
YOU ARE MIRROR OF GOD
YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL LORD
MOON AND STSRS ON UR FEET
LOVE BLESS AND BEAUTY IS YOUR TREAT
YOU ARE OURS
AND WE ARE YOURS
YOUR SMILE IS STORY OF GOD
YOUR HANDS ARE KINGDOM
YOU ARE KING
WHEN WE SING
THEN YOU RING US
YOU ARE HOLY
YOU ARE HOLY
WE ARE SINGERS OF YOUR FATHER`S KINGDOM COME QUICK OUR LOVE CALLS YOU HANDSOME
OUR THIRSTY LIPS CALLING YOU FROM NIGHT TO MORNING
COME AND FILL US WE ARE THIRSTY WE ARE THIRSTY
STARS MOON SMILES BIRDS ALL ARE YOUR POETRY
BY: MANSOOR (DANIAL)
ITS FOR YOU DAINAILA
BY: MANSOOR JARWAR "
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Re: JESUS YOU ARE A MIRROR (Score: 1)
by Casinova on Friday, September 03 @ 11:16:15 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Great!!!! I'm christian and I think that anytime someone is open about expressing their love for Jesus, I'm all for it. Good Job!!!! |
Re: JESUS YOU ARE A MIRROR (Score: 1)
by biggybird01 on Friday, September 03 @ 13:08:00 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | great job. I love GOD and he loves me!! keep up the great writin'. |
Re: JESUS YOU ARE A MIRROR (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Saturday, September 04 @ 09:57:05 UTC | Hi,
This is the 3rd time 'am reading this. This is a poetic gospel. I love ya 4 this.
Above all I believe Jesus love you all the more.
- Logos |
Re: JESUS YOU ARE A MIRROR (Score: 1)
by Sidney on Sunday, September 05 @ 17:04:26 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://www.muohio.edu | I love God also...
but this isn't what i'd call wonderful poetry. Perhaps a list of "praises", but as a poem, it is lacking. Some words are invented and used that dont make sense, like "dears" and "love bless". There are just major grammar issues here. So aside from it being shallow in description, almost completely lacking in image, and juvenile in language, its a good piece. never stop writing
sidney |
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