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: I CAN'T BELIEVE U HIT ME!!!(PLEASE COMMENT)
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on Friday, September 03 @ 12:47:22 UTC
biggybird01 writes:: " I was looking forward as we were having a dispute
I guess U didn't like what I said
And U were mute
U raised your hand I didn't see it coming
OH MY GOD YOU HIT ME!
The tears started streaming
At my face you looked
U continued to say your point
I was now crying and shaking
I STILL COULDN'T BELIEVE YOU HIT ME!
I wondered in my head for awhile
Wondering what triggered such anger
I turned red
And thats when I knew the mistake I made
NO ONES EVER HIT ME IN MY FACE BEFORE
The pain I can still feel
OH MY GOD YOU HIT ME!
I don't think I'll ever forget it
It really hurt for the most of it
All I did was speak my mind
I guess next time I'll lie
U HIT ME
I still can't believe it!
U HIT ME
I keep replaying it
U HIT ME
U can't lie about it
U HIT ME
U didn't stop to think about it
U HIT ME
I guess thats how you deal with it
U HIT ME
Why'd you do it
U HIT ME
U even admitted it
U HIT ME
What made you do it
U HIT ME
I'll never forever think of it
U HIT ME
I WILL NEVER EVER IN MY LIFE FORGET IT!!!!!!! "
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Re: I CAN'T BELIEVE U HIT ME!!!(PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 1)
by charmer (jazz13697@hotmail.com) on Friday, September 03 @ 13:05:15 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | god that's mad, who hit u?
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Re: I CAN'T BELIEVE U HIT ME!!!(PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 1)
by Paula_Skyy (paulaskyy@yahoo.com) on Friday, September 03 @ 13:06:37 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Where I came from a slap in the face would have been nothing in fact it was an everyday occurance.Im sorry you got hit its not write I feel for you.anyway good poem full of emotion,nicejob |
Re: I CAN'T BELIEVE U HIT ME!!!(PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 1)
by Sonia on Friday, September 03 @ 13:34:08 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Ya cool poem....but really sad..!! i can feel that...it never happened to me but still i can feel it..!!...n thanxx for always commenting on my poems...Sonia" |
Re: I CAN'T BELIEVE U HIT ME!!!(PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 1)
by StrongWisperer (willowchild74@wmconnect.com) on Sunday, September 05 @ 14:45:42 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | i really love this poem! i can feel the anger, the confussion, and better yet i truely admire your standing up and being all "what the HELL?!" i can just hear the "what the f*&^% make you think you had the right?" resounding all thoughout this piece.
Don't ever hide your turths, don't ever stop the questions - i don't care what you said, he was older; let him behave his age. Hitting isn't okay.
~*amber*~ |
Re: I CAN'T BELIEVE U HIT ME!!!(PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 1)
by suv_rockz on Tuesday, September 07 @ 03:48:35 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | i feel so bad for u! but i'm glad ur ritin abt it...it helps to reduce the intensity of anger and emotions inside. very well ritten ...lots of feelings....keep writing, dont bottle up ur feelings
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