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: Drowning
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on Friday, September 10 @ 09:33:10 UTC
Anonymous writes:: " You can't breathe
Its building up inside of you
Taking over you
Drowning in anger
U can't fight it
U can't hide from it
U can't run from it
Drowning in anger
U scream
U struggle
U cry
But ur still in its grip
Nothing can stop u
Not anymore
Part of you is dead
Now ur drowning in anger
It wasn't ur fault
It wasn't u
It was inside
Twisting, hurting
Every minute
of every day
It became u
It took what u had
Made u forget
Forget how to smile
Foget how to laugh
to hope
to dream
U gave up
U broke down
U drowned "
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Re: Drowning (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, September 10 @ 18:20:09 UTC | | I thought this poem was well written and expresses the anger and hurt that many feel today! The person struggles with themself, blaming themself for something, but will not give up the anger and so they are lost forever! Good Job! I like it very much! |
- Re: Drowning by Anonymous on Saturday, September 11 @ 01:14:49 UTC
Re: Drowning (Score: 1)
by CorruptedSpirit (BiteMeFreakz@aol.com) on Saturday, May 21 @ 10:55:09 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | What a poem, i can only say that i bow down to you on this one. If there was a perfect poem, this would be a good contender.
Danny |
Re: Drowning (Score: 1)
by Lee-Civico-Cambell on Wednesday, June 08 @ 10:14:33 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I know it's the style of the poem but I don't like replacing full words with texting style language. I also don't think this says anything particularly new. This is ok as a starting point but needs a lot of work. It appears though that I am in a minority with my views that this is not a particularly interesting piece.
Sorry for being negative
Lee |
Re: Drowning (Score: 1)
by darksinthe on Thursday, September 08 @ 07:12:07 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Im a transsexual. this poem describes my pain well. |
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Poem's Rating
Average Score: 4.83
Votes: 148
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