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Fake Friends
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on Friday, July 11 @ 00:00:00 UTC
xxbabyrenxx writes:: " What is friendship? How should I know?
Just when you think someone is your best friend,
they mess up the flow.
They reveal they aren't your true friend,
and you realize that you got screwed over in the end.
They walk away with their dignity and you chase after them begging, "please forgive me"..but no..its not good enough for them
Just when you think you know someone they suprise you...lifting their veil, removing their mask and scaring you to hell.
Who would've guessed? How they would dress? Who'd they become best friends with? G-d knows what shit about you they spread around..my world, my life, goes spirling down...when will i hit the ground?
I thought you were my friend and i guess i was wrong, but does it really have to be like this in the end? I thought we were friends!
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Re: Fake Friends (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, December 08 @ 23:50:29 UTC | | i think your trying too hard. |
Re: Fake Friends (Score: 1)
by Sdstccruelty on Tuesday, December 23 @ 22:04:44 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | don't force the rhyme scheme... if it doesn't flow in your head before you write it, just avoid rhyming all together. |
Re: Fake Friends (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, February 06 @ 21:14:59 UTC | | nice thought...i kno how u feel...u have too much emotion and when u write it on paper...u want it to sound nice so that other ppl will understand u easier...but ive found that ppl understand u easier when u write straight from the heart without filtering it with your pen...just words of advice...but then again...im only 16...wat the hell do i know...lolz |
Re: Fake Friends (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, July 23 @ 17:31:16 UTC | | Has potential but no depth... L-) |
Re: Fake Friends (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, November 04 @ 18:51:55 UTC | | i often had a friend like that. it was very good and u rule and i am a freak |
Re: Fake Friends (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Wednesday, November 10 @ 09:14:42 UTC | Hey sup? I liked this one. I also know how it is to have someone fuck you over.
Just know it doen't really matter in the end. You'll always find more fake friends!
JDcool |
Re: Fake Friends (Score: 1)
by charmer (jazz13697@hotmail.com) on Friday, November 19 @ 14:48:53 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | this is fantastic, this is EXACTLY how i feel, its wonderful, its brought me alot of tears, i have several ppl going cold like that on me, its comforting to find someone who understands, if u ever need any one to talk you who understands you
im here
jazz13697@hotmail.com |
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Average Score: 4
Votes: 13
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