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on Sunday, January 11 @ 19:41:44 UTC
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: Signed: I’ll love ya forever…Until I don’t
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on Sunday, January 11 @ 19:41:44 UTC
Emsly writes:: " Signed:
“Love ya”
Signed:
“I love you”
Signed:
“I love you, and miss you”
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“I love you so much”
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“I will love you longer than the geological time scale”
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“Love you – more than you can possibly comprehend!”
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“I love you for-eh-vah”
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“I love you baby doll”
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“Talk to ya later”
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“Bye”
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“-Later”
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“Maybe I’ll see you around”
What happened?
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- Re: ... by Anonymous on Monday, January 12 @ 18:20:24 UTC
- Re: ... by xxbabyrenxx on Wednesday, January 04 @ 19:26:00 UTC
Re: Signed: I’ll love ya forever…Until I don’t (Score: 1)
by xxbabyrenxx (ny14flower@aol.com) on Wednesday, January 04 @ 19:24:22 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | love it, sooo true, and so easy to see/notice when you look back on it, but so hard to comprehend and stop while its happening. a similiar situation happened to me, my first love, i thought it'd last forever, but we grew apart instead of together, and fell out of love. it still baffles me how this happened, and of course its easier to notice after-the-fact the seemingly subtle transitions of emoion and interaction that you list here. bascically i love this poem, can totally relate to it, great job, keeping on writing more! |
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