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Turbulent
Posted by on Wednesday, November 03 @ 16:01:35 UTC

: Say Anything (PLEASE COMMENT)
on Wednesday, November 03 @ 16:01:35 UTC
IncoherentGirl writes:: "

What do you see when you look at me?
Can you see the truth that can't break free?
What do you see when your looking into my eyes?
Can you see the true me or do you get lost in this deep green sea?
What do you see when you look at me?
Can you see how much I'm really hurting?
What are you thinking of when you see me sinking cause I can't rise above my insecurities?
Would you believe me if I told you of all the times that I've tried to commit suicide?
What would you say if I told you that at the end of every day I would check my weight hoping and praying that I haven't gained?
What would you say if I told you that I haven't ate in almost 28 days?
What would you say?
Would you say anything? "


 
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Re: Say Anything (PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 1)
by badmofo on Wednesday, November 03 @ 18:05:17 UTC
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Many question and zero answers.
If this is a true representation of how you are living at the moment then I recommend you actually ask questions in a straight-forward manner towards whomever seems to be creating this inner dialogue in you.

Your poem is very naked. Clearly you need to cloak your feelings in a more tasty tortilla. The questions are great but it seems less like a poem and more like an internal conflict that you hastily threw on virtual paper.

I like it for the simple fact that you didn't censor yourself but I would LOVE to see some time spent crafting a background. Better yet, how about a subtle reveal as to whom you are directing these inquiries?

I bid you peace.


Re: Say Anything (PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, November 05 @ 08:09:40 UTC
Your poem has touched me in a way none ever could. I have been through what u r going through. I have learnt tho that starving yourself does not solve anything.
Please get help. Im sure u have people who love u and want u better.
How did you get in this situation if you dont mind me asking? .x


Re: Say Anything (PLEASE COMMENT) (Score: 1)
by blovely on Thursday, November 11 @ 02:34:35 UTC
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What would I say?
Been there, done that and understand!
was once forgotten now loved.
think about that.


 
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