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on Thursday, November 11 @ 01:59:25 UTC
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: Childsplay
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on Thursday, November 11 @ 01:59:25 UTC
blovely writes:: " Questions that have crossed my mind.
Answers I shall seek and find.
Like the game we play as kids, my answers have ran and hid.
In the dark they don't hid alone because burden, trust and love came along.
Rollercoasters up and down, magic mirrors and scary clowns.
Prize gifts I do not win, without fair tokens I can't get in!
In pity I will take a bath. Until burden, trust and love come back.
Feelings I do not cast away, I just wish my answers could come out and play.
Tag you're it, it's your turn to go.
Lets play truth or dare.No one will know!
Will I find love?
When will I turn ill?
Will I have kids, named Jack and named Jill?
What's in my future, will I be rich?
Answers.Answers,please tell me quick.
Now I have friends burden and trust.
Love didn't come she'll take a bus.
The tire went flat on her way home.
She never wrote, she never phoned.
So burden, trust and I sit at home.
So burden told trust that love had told him," not to trust burden or make him a friend!"
Now I am burdened with answers again.
Love don't trust burden, who is whose friend?
A playground full of feelings and games that are fun.
I battered my brain until recess was done.
The answers I seek I now shall find.
It was all clear when I left Childsplay behind!
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Re: Childsplay (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, November 11 @ 02:25:38 UTC | | needs some work but all together it could be a pretty good poem |
Re: Childsplay (Score: 1)
by pyroangel on Thursday, November 11 @ 07:17:56 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | it's okay. |
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