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on Wednesday, November 17 @ 09:03:10 UTC
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: Just in the distance
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on Wednesday, November 17 @ 09:03:10 UTC
syloss writes:: " Your smile and laughter just in the distance,
I long for us to be together with so much insistence,
These days with out you seem too never end,
I wade through the day with my heart to contend,
With feelings this askew no chance to transcend.
Continued sleeplessness tossing and turning,
An eternity of hopelessness heart ache and yearning,
The horror of forever darkness continues the fight,
Nothing but think of you through out the night,
Shadows in the closet of my mind wish for the light.
Cherishing the moments of what was at hand,
Suffering the longing of night's evil demands,
The Gods of Time and Love seem to have co-erst,
With the advent of beautiful love time flies at first,
The quagmire of its ending pain infinitely the worst
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Re: Just in the distance randy_todisco@yahoo.com (Score: 1)
by randy on Wednesday, November 17 @ 18:37:14 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Very very good I liked it very much. I looked in your profile you only had two poems in there, I read them both. Keep up the good work, you have a great sence of vocabulary. Keep working good luck
Randy Todisco |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by Jazz (jazz13697@hotmail.com) on Thursday, November 25 @ 15:04:10 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | fantastic. |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by biggybird06 on Wednesday, December 01 @ 10:14:08 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Great Job you need to keep it up..
~shanika |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Friday, February 04 @ 17:10:27 UTC | I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM JAMES!!!!!
Jennifer |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, March 29 @ 04:18:23 UTC | WOW!!!
this is fantastic,amazing and a great poem please write more i want to read more!!!! :)
Blackwidow |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, March 29 @ 04:19:38 UTC | i like it alot
Blackwidow xxxx (again) |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by GracieLou (goodnight_gracie2@yahoo.com) on Tuesday, May 24 @ 16:29:06 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Wow!! I really like this one!!
GracieLou |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by LostLove on Wednesday, February 15 @ 12:38:45 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | You have a talent for writing poetry! However, you need to take your time to insure that you spell everything correctly.
Like when you said " days without you seem TOO never end." I't should say TO. |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by LostLove on Wednesday, February 15 @ 12:38:48 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | You have a talent for writing poetry! However, you need to take your time to insure that you spell everything correctly.
Like when you said " days without you seem TOO never end." I't should say TO. |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by Sidney on Monday, January 23 @ 13:43:45 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://www.myspace.com/friendscallmesid | this poem's recieved a lot of praise for some reason.
I have quite the opposite opinion.
this piece is chock full of cliche, the rhyming is trite and at times awkward in itself. i could write a page worth of things that need serious attention. not the worst thing i've read, but contrary to almost every comment here, most definately not the best.
all that aside, there is a sentiment here worth pursuing. never stop writing.
sidney |
Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by lucky on Wednesday, December 07 @ 17:06:01 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | nice rhyming
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Re: Just in the distance (Score: 1)
by loveislikepainonarainyday on Saturday, August 20 @ 11:37:25 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | what a great poem! although i dont really know all of the word but still great poem. lol
people please comment and vote on my poems too! |
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