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Reflective
Posted by on Tuesday, December 21 @ 17:37:56 UTC

: More than Friends, Less than lovers
on Tuesday, December 21 @ 17:37:56 UTC
chukkii writes:: " It started off as just a talk
you know a innocent situation
He came over the next night
and we had casual conversation.
I'm listening to his verbal abilities
trying to see what he was about
waiting to see if his shit was real
or was he mostly just all mouth.
I'm kinda feeling this brotha
wondering if it's too good to be true
You know all shit sound good to you
especially when the shits new.


So we started a special kind of relationship
one without any commit
but when feelings start developing
well certain emotions we just can't omit.
Women always seem to mess this up
or is it, we're the only one to show it
Men feel that shit too
Just don't want our ass to know it.
It's been over two years
and we're still going strong
relationship hasn't changed on his part
as far as he concerned, nothings even wrong.

Who am I fooling?
I'm so in love
I can't even deny it
It's always worn on my face
So why should I try to hide it?
I'll keep holding on
maybe soon he'll give in
I be damned if i come out a loser
when I'm always out to win.
Although I think he's just scared
we really seem to like each other
we're alot more than friends
but still...a little less than lovers. "


 
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Re: More than Friends, Less than lovers (Score: 1)
by probat on Wednesday, December 22 @ 02:27:44 UTC
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I like ur poem it brings alot out of u alot of emootion remiinds me of a rap son that white folks change the station im paul ceo of paradox inc and if u need a friend im me apostolaki22 aight keep writting
p.s im white but i love rap


Re: More than Friends, Less than lovers (Score: 1)
by eyerice on Wednesday, December 22 @ 13:03:41 UTC
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I think Pauls comment blew me away more than the poem-
I like the poem- even with the slang- better if it werent there but I suppose the crudness of it can add something- Its sad how so many people are in relationships and dont know where they stand- After two years I say if he hasnt come across with the goods- replace him. :) LOL!


 
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