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on Tuesday, January 04 @ 16:00:04 UTC
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on Tuesday, January 04 @ 16:00:04 UTC
honey writes:: " Eyes of blue, thinking they were true
She falls for him, losing it all
She abandons her friends, gives up her life
Lets everything go, just for one moment in time
She loses him then has nothing left
And this is how it ends "
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Re: Unfinished (Score: 1)
by marinka (frufrumnky@yahoo.com) on Tuesday, January 04 @ 18:19:17 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | so true, so true.... simply put. i like poems like this, art that expresses exactly what it is meant to express, nothing more but nothing less. good job. |
Re: Unfinished (Score: 1)
by Ravenloft (devinouis@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, January 05 @ 13:46:11 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | It sucks that somebody with your writing ability would appear to have been hurt so deeply. Whatever happens for you, I do hope it gets better - in all sincerity. This poem, as well as the others I've read, have been really good. Keep writing, honey.. I'll gladly keep reading. |
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