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DUPLICATE - VOTE TO REJECT
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on Sunday, January 30 @ 00:00:00 UTC
violent-siolence writes:: " Feeling so small, she falls to a ball,
nobody noticed as she crawled to the wall.
Clutching her side, her emotions erupting inside. his face photographed on her mind as he died.
Now she's alone, with no one to hold.
It's been three days and no one she's told.
There may well be a funeral but no one will show, raised in care then abandoned-no one will know.
No shoulder to drench with her physical pain,
nobody understands the emotional strain.
She can't grasp the fact she'll never hug him again.
The scars reappear on her arms, much deeper.
Life was always a climb, now it's much steeper, the grief in a week, she knows will defeat her.
She appears at his grave and posts her note through the earth.
She asks his engraved name, How much did it hurt.
She invites death to her house, they silently sit. they go straight too her wrist and violently slit.
They always shared secrets, now they share fait.
These children were twelve, they shouldn't have known hate. "
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Re: DUPLICATE - VOTE TO REJECT (Score: 1)
by Orobourus (Burningbright2@aol.com) on Sunday, January 30 @ 12:41:41 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This is very good, emotional and compassionate. it describes a loss so profound that it detroys even innocence.
If this is true, Im so sorry for you, I can only imagine the turmoil of losing someone.
Elinor |
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