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Anger
Posted by on Sunday, February 13 @ 02:48:13 UTC

: SUICIDE
on Sunday, February 13 @ 02:48:13 UTC
Blackwidow writes:: " Suicisde
drugs and ciggarettes
Alchochol and beer
Suicide
lets all cheer

Get so drunk
jump of a cliff
Police have come
but my face is already splattered

Theirs eye balls
blood gushing everywhere
but my SUICIDE has already
happened

Suicide
i'll kill myself
SUICIDE
Have drugs and beer
but i just need to tell you
that i went on
S
U
I
C
I
D
E "


 
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Re: SUICIDE (Score: 1)
by Mephistor on Sunday, February 13 @ 12:06:31 UTC
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Please take it easy Blackwidow. I am not a proffesional- but please make yourself want to live again- please see your existence like a present by the love of your lifetime- as something to treasure indefinately -as something you need to care for and protect. I know these are just words from a distant place -send to you by satalite. But I can assure you- me having swallowed anything possible likewise -longing for death to come sometimes- that things get better. There is always that silverline outlining the darkest clouds at the night sky.
Your desires are normal just like your despair is- you will also make up your mind about what you want -just take your time- you will in the end be satisfied I promise- and nothing is un-attainable in life- be a little divers! You can be and have what you want- just use a little imagination and the help of others- be true to yourself- there is no escape but certainly there is escapism that will not destroy you like beer and drugs does. Drugs which are problems with sollutions likewise- even drugs and depression can prove to be an usefull thing in the end- there is nothing we humans need to be asshamed of my friend- you know the difference between right and wrong- you are beautifull in your own way- just keep that back straight and your head up- listen to the music you like- and write something less morose next time- something more cryptical and methaphorical- spread your wings and live your life with the people you love -you silly spider- they are there you know- people that love you in their own funny litle way- people not awaiting your revenge as in suicide- taking your own life is their punishment and not yours.


Re: SUICIDE (Score: 1)
by blackrose12 (silentassasin_ak@yahoo.com) on Monday, February 14 @ 11:04:19 UTC
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I enjoyed this poem seeing that i used to be able to relate to it so well. However, time changes so much and sometimes you need to just wait and see what life hands you. My life was a living hell for so long. I tried to kill myself and thank God I was unsuccessful. Though things haven't gotten any easier I see all the small things I took for granted. There is so much to experience in life and it's worth going over the obstacles. They make you stronger as a person. I'm not the most credible person in the world but from my experiences this is what i gathered. Aside from that you're a good writer and i can see you getting better with everything submitted. keep writing!


 
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