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Posted by on Tuesday, February 15 @ 03:56:03 UTC

: SHE BREAKS MY LIFE APART
on Tuesday, February 15 @ 03:56:03 UTC
Blackwidow writes:: " This girl i am writing about
you would never want to know her
She is the one thing that breaks my life apart
and my now ending friendship

i cry to think she likes me
But how i dont understand
She gives me looks
and i make faces
to make her just understand

It is finally half term
i want to get away
she forced my friends to like her
I would hate for her to stay!

Just get out of my face
i want to punch you now
To get you away
tell the message how?

Please anyone give me advice
i need a cure its like head lice

If you have any comment please tell me
this is a true story i will plea and plea

and she has told me
that if i say anything mean
she will tell of me
Definately!

P.S any advice would be much appreciated!

E . B . Machen (puppylover or Blackwidow) "


 
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Re: SHE BREAKS MY LIFE APART (Score: 1)
by blackrose12 (silentassasin_ak@yahoo.com) on Tuesday, February 15 @ 10:53:51 UTC
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The poem showed true emotion which made it all the better. As far as giving advice on this situation I'm not sure what to tell you. Usually my way of dealing with things gets me suspended or stuck in jail. Maybe you could try talking it out with her and tell her how you feel. Maybe she would realize how she makes you feel and wouldn't be such a pain.


Re: SHE BREAKS MY LIFE APART (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Wednesday, February 16 @ 23:04:12 UTC
I think blackrose's advice is good. I remember at your age things were difficult to sort out, if she keeps bothering you, you can always make a new set of friends; if your friends turn against you because of her that is...and if this happens you'll have a good idea what friendship is really about.
I think if she wont stop bugging you, perhaps you could just ignore what you dislike and try to focus on whats good about her. A lot of times, you'll find you can forget about her when you want.
best wishes
Elinor


 
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