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on Wednesday, January 21 @ 06:05:55 UTC
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: I Cry Out For You.
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on Wednesday, January 21 @ 06:05:55 UTC
sats writes:: " Im in a state of confusion,
The wind is in my face,
Oh god, oh god i pray you ll help me,
I can not do this alone,
Help me, help me.
I cry to you in the dark,
Hear my voice, hear me cry to you,
Oh god please hear me,
Im lost and alone, im crying inside,
Oh my love, my life, my everything hear me.
Im walking a road with no end in sight,
There s something inside that hurts me,
I feel the pain, oh how i cry with it,
How i wish it would dissapear.
I want it gone, oh how i want it gone,
But dreams are not real ,things take time,
Love conquers all so they say does it conquer this,
I feel empty, i feel so very bad inside.
This thing it grows with each passing day how am i to cope,
What am i to do, im confused alone, empty,
Even in your arms the emptiness remains,
Oh help me, i beg, i plead to much for you i can see.
Oh what shall i do, my love,
I ask you ,i ask again what answer do i receive,
You say those cruel things i need not hear,
Oh god why am i here,
I feel so weak when im normally strong.
What makes me this way is you is it me,
Who can i blame, what shall i do,
The confusion never ends and life begins,
Every day the same, the feelings to.
On and on its going oh god what shall i do,
Do i pray,beg, oh please help me,
What will i do my pleas are unheard by you,
Oh god, my love, my love ,
Please help me im asking you this one last time,
To help me to help myself,
Give me a chance to be the best i can.
Help me fight this inside me,
I crave you, need you so desperately,
Oh god, oh god help me,
Why am i so unable to go on without help,
Im weak i need you,
And in return you will get my undying love.
Help me my love, my love,
Fill my heart with love, take away the pain inside me,
I ask to much i know i do but i ask only what i deserve,
To be loved and cared for in my times ahead,
And if ever you needed me i would be there for you.
As i expect from you,
Oh my love hear my plea.
And forever i will remain your one and only love.
"
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Re: I Cry Out For You. (Score: 1)
by Pingpong on Wednesday, January 21 @ 10:46:09 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | PP-Hey! It sounds like something I would write!!!
YPP- -_-U Did you take you medicine?
PP- ^^ No, but this poet is REALLY GOOD!!!
YPP- God help us all, she's finally snapped....
PP- ~_^ Anywoo, this was great... We don't really know how the whole system works yet, but we're working on it. Forgive us for any mistakes... |
Re: I Cry Out For You. (Score: 1)
by Wordpoet on Wednesday, January 21 @ 14:26:29 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://wordpoet.tripod.com | Vivd. Dark and desparate with fingers gripping tightly to the edge of hope. It would be difficult to read this without feeling the emotions involved.
Good job. |
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