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Making Love (haiku)
on Wednesday, August 20 @ 00:00:00 UTC
fredrika writes:: " our bodies join in
passionate ecstacy, 2
hearts become as 1. "


 
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Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by Sdstccruelty on Tuesday, December 23 @ 22:02:23 UTC
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nice


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by Baby_Girl on Tuesday, March 09 @ 17:00:14 UTC
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very nice. So much emotinon, packed in so few words


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by Damaris on Sunday, April 18 @ 17:36:39 UTC
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this haiku is really nice


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by perv on Wednesday, July 14 @ 08:35:12 UTC
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this is so bad do you really think this is of any merit whatsover? it is just cliched nonsense that could be a quote from a mexican soap opera. you are not by chance a particularly bored victoria beckham


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by perv on Wednesday, July 14 @ 08:36:30 UTC
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you people ae idiots


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, September 16 @ 12:03:24 UTC
oh please!!!!!!! u couldn't do any better than 2 corny ass lines u probably stole off some wack soap opera?!!! i really hope u don't actually believe what u wrote is n.e.thing close 2 poetic... : (


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, November 04 @ 19:00:26 UTC
it was very bad and i am a freak


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Saturday, November 06 @ 21:33:31 UTC
well. sorry to say but. u sux. don't become a poet. u truly sux at it
`Cassie


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by maim_me on Monday, January 03 @ 06:39:55 UTC
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it's nice.
but did u write it?


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by Dhruv on Wednesday, May 18 @ 02:44:17 UTC
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no offense or anything, but wouldnt you rather submit it somewhere else, maybe like a quotes, forum?

dhruv


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 23 @ 08:43:44 UTC
intresting


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Monday, May 23 @ 09:59:09 UTC
1


Re: Making Love (haiku) (Score: 1)
by full_of_grace on Saturday, August 20 @ 14:35:59 UTC
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right on!!!


 
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