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: Desiese know as depression.
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on Sunday, March 20 @ 13:49:53 UTC
BrianKeith writes:: " I torque your mind from deep inside.
I play around with the pain and anger you hide.
To see you suffer like me.
Brings me pleasure and my own anger is set free.
Your innecent mind that I have confused.
I leave your mind battered and bruised.
Illusions of hate you can't ignore.
I show you how much your lifes a bore.
I am forsaken darkness in your mind.
Your suicidal actions are mine.
For they are my grandest illusions.
I make you believe Reality is but a state of delusion.
I bring you the anger you feel
Followed by the sarrow you forget to cry.
I make your mind ill.
For you fogot how to try.
The darkness with no light.
Is matched with the darkness of night.
Forsaken pleasure that you let rot away.
Only to feel alone for another day.
I promise you heaven but dammed you to hell.
Now you watch out the window of a lonly cell.
Your mind remains weak.
To the lies I speak.
The Pain ,Hate,Sorrow, Torment, Agony, loneliness,and the tormented thoughts that you think is my greatest work I am now you Forbidden friend. I'll be around till the end. I am the desiese known as DEPRESSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes this is mine The dark poet known as BrianKeith "
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Re: Desiese know as depression. (Score: 1)
by sbsms8 (sam_benson14@hotmail.com) on Monday, March 21 @ 00:19:43 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | hmm i'm thinkin i like this poem even though it's dark, i still find it to be intriguing and very true about how depression works..keep writing dark ur good at it =D
-sam |
Re: Desiese know as depression. (Score: 1)
by xbrokenxheartx (mobtownsk8er649@hotmail.com) on Monday, March 21 @ 06:56:33 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | be sure to check your spelling but other wise i love it |
Re: Desiese know as depression. (Score: 1)
by blackrose12 (silentassasin_ak@yahoo.com) on Wednesday, March 23 @ 10:51:24 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Once again another brilliant write. Love it!
Deanna |
Re: Desiese know as depression. (Score: 1)
by JDcool (jdcool038@yahoo.com) on Monday, March 28 @ 14:36:43 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | if i were elinor, i'd say, "this is how you spell it: desease." THE END. LOL. So, I loved it Brian. And I hope the desease goes away.
JEN |
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