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Turbulent
Posted by on Thursday, March 31 @ 05:09:12 UTC

: GOODBYE
on Thursday, March 31 @ 05:09:12 UTC
suv_rockz writes:: " Left with a feeling of loneliness
The darkness never fades
Try to put on a chirpy face
But the feeling still remains


The anger keeps mounting
I'm getting outta control
I give an outward smile
That doesn't reach my soul


Tired of the sadness
My life is no good
Try to lift my spirits
But can't change my mood


No trace of any sunshine
The sadness never goes away
Tired of living this desperate life
Can’t get through another day


Can’t trust anyone no more
Feel lonely even in a crowd
The silence around is deafening
My thoughts are way too loud


All alone in my lonely world
Paper is my only friend
Dunno why this is happening
No one to turn to in the end


I tried my best till the end
Dunno what to say-from where to start
Sorry for the trouble that I caused
I’m leaving the world with a heavy heart
"


 
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Re: GOODBYE (Score: 1)
by Missy on Thursday, March 31 @ 12:35:56 UTC
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Liked this, had good rythym and was written well. I can understand that feeling of loneliness, you expressed yourself well.
-Melis


Re: GOODBYE (Score: 1)
by Dhruv on Monday, April 04 @ 05:07:36 UTC
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i cant really seem to be able to criticise this in any way. im just loving it. the description is electrifying...


  • Re: GOODBYE by debu206 on Tuesday, May 03 @ 14:17:22 UTC
 
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