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Romance
Posted by on Friday, April 01 @ 04:00:22 UTC

: WHEN YOU CAME
on Friday, April 01 @ 04:00:22 UTC
suv_rockz writes:: " I was drowning in silence
When you called my name
I was lost in loneliness
When you finally came


I was groping in the darkness
When you held my hand
I had given up trying
When you told me, ‘you can’


I was crying myself to sleep
When you wiped away my tears
I was all alone and scared
When you helped me fight my fears


You mean the world to me
You’re the reason to my smile
I owe you my life –
You’re the reason I’m alive







"


 
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Re: WHEN YOU CAME (Score: 1)
by Missy on Friday, April 01 @ 11:29:58 UTC
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Really liked this, has alot of emotion and shows how you really appreciate having someone there to help you through your hard times and who was there for you. Was written well.
-Melissa


Re: WHEN YOU CAME (Score: 1)
by Dhruv on Monday, April 04 @ 05:01:18 UTC
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yet another amazing composition, i loved the way you showed your emotions towards the person, whoever it may be.


 
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