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Posted by
on Thursday, January 22 @ 15:59:30 UTC
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: Broken-Hearted
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on Thursday, January 22 @ 15:59:30 UTC
Anonymous writes:: " This dedicated to all the broken-hearted gurls who have recently regained strength and finally rekindled their souls.........
Once more I gave in.
Once more I've committed a sin,
But this time wasnt like before.
Other guys pleazed me more.
He thinks he is so great,
but his touch feels so fake.
The smell of booz on his breath,
reminding me of his old self.
Not that he has changed.
He's still lonely and estranged.
I feel bad and pity him.
He finishes off bottles of gin.
That's his life, back and forth.
This poor, poor lil' dwarf.
Getting any gurl anywhere,
acting as if he truely cares.
That's how he lured me in several times....
with that one convincing line.
That what we shared would eventually lead---
to something I've always hoped and dreamed.
He says he wants a serious relationship. Bullshit! All he wants is coochy and tits.
Not a love that's tender and mild.
Damn, I'm one crazy child.(hehehe)
But now I see through the hurt and agony, that Dish is a bitch and probably will always be.
But I don't blame him.
I'm the one who chose to sin.
I was sooo fucking naive.....
actually believing this guy was worth keeping. "
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Re: Broken-Hearted (Score: 1)
by ChelseyLee on Thursday, January 22 @ 16:20:00 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | this was a great poem....me and my bf just broke up and so i feel wuts goin on in the poem.....good job!
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Re: Broken-Hearted (Score: 1)
by sats on Monday, January 26 @ 06:26:25 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Sometimes people, men and women, can be cold and hurtful to others but i hope, really hope that at least you ve come out of this situation with your head held high be proud of you no matter what. Be strong and maybe just maybe you ll find someone worthy of your love ok. |
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