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on Monday, April 04 @ 12:13:17 UTC
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: ONLY I
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on Monday, April 04 @ 12:13:17 UTC
BrianKeith writes:: " the is here the time is now
time for my final show
you know what is to come of me
through my dark poems you could plainly see
I wished death upon me.
only i can take away the pain
only i know what drives me insane.
only i know the torment
only I see im a disappiontment
only I know the anger
only I feel the hunger
only I know the hate
only i know what it ate
only i know the sarrow
only I feeling of being hollow
I can take it away
yet I can see another day
a life without a dream
is a pathetic one as it may seem
a life with out care
will life ever be fare
for the riddle starts here
for the thought of death I dont fear
its the thought of being dead is what to fear
only I know me
only i know what has to be
only I hide the truth
only I can see the truth
only I see the tears that I haven't cried
only I can know what I haven't tried
only I know what I fein
ONLY I KNOW WHAT I'VE SEEN
GOOD- BYE ALL
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Re: ONLY I (Score: 1)
by zesta on Monday, April 04 @ 12:51:52 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | this is good. i can know what you are talking about. and only i can take away my pain too. but how i choose to do it. will be my lifes accomplisment. hang in there you will succumb, and overcome. its all a test, it'll be awesome.
besides you have a lot of talent to live for. |
Re: ONLY I (Score: 1)
by Missy on Monday, April 04 @ 16:11:30 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This was good, and Brian I do hope you will one day overcome alot of your pain. This showed alot of emotion and what you always go through. How you feel was written down well, always keep writing.
-Melissa |
Re: ONLY I (Score: 1)
by marinka (frufrumnky@yahoo.com) on Monday, April 04 @ 23:55:06 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | wow. i've run from this thought. the pain of thinking that death is the only answer is enough for me to never think it again. i hope that you discover that life is worth living, but above all else life is free. i know, that sounds a bit vague and exaggerated, but i believe it's true, it is your life, screw the fucked up system. threw authority and expectations. live life for you. but in the end, it still is your life. so if you must take control of your end, i hope you will be happy then. smile. |
Re: ONLY I (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Thursday, April 07 @ 10:33:43 UTC | only i can make fun of your work.
only i can punch you in the mouth
only i can tell you to shut the fuck up and take up a new hobbie |
- Re: ONLY I by BrianKeith on Friday, April 08 @ 05:33:02 UTC
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