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: this is the fin
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on Wednesday, April 06 @ 20:09:26 UTC
BrianKeith writes:: " For I am the hated one now aren't I.
Because I spoke out about Bush.
You all want the madness to die.
Shall I say good bye.
To say Forgive and forget.
God may forgive but I will never forget.
Yes you all see the anger.
now the fued is over.
but still I hunger.
I wrote you all the last Ha Ra
and you asked for my return.
my tormented mind you all saw.
Still you wanted my return.
So to you all shall I say sorry.
But what the worry.
I am the hated one now and forever.
I speak out from my frozen heart.
So should I appalegize now or never.
Well I found what to do.
I must fade away like the morning dew
so fare well to you all.
there I said sorry in my own way.
what else must I say.
It soon will be another day,
and I have faded away.
into the night from where I came.
this site will never treat me the same.
For I spoke out
and now you all shoved me out.
but before I go I wish you all a good fare well.
NOW THIS IS THE FINAL POEM
GOOD-BYE
JDCOOL,MISSY,BUDITREE,RAVENLOFT,AND ALL
THAT EVER WROTE ME A COMMENT ON MY POEMS.
"
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Re: this is the fin (Score: 1)
by blackrose12 (silentassasin_ak@yahoo.com) on Thursday, April 07 @ 12:00:18 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | You shouldn't let people chase you from this site. You told your opinion. They don't agree. Not everyone will. That doesn't matter...they'll eventually suck it up and get over it. |
El Fin De JDcool (Score: 1)
by JDcool (jdcool038@yahoo.com) on Thursday, April 07 @ 16:35:41 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Brian,
if you do this to me again and leave this site, then you might as well be saying goodbye to me (in every way possible). I'm not going to take this because I'm tired of bringing you up only to find out that random people push you down. It's dumb, and it's not LIKE YOU to just give up and go. I KNOW that you are stronger than this bullshit. I will not beg. I will not plead for your return. If you are leaving, than GOOD-BYE BrianKeith. May your journey through life NOT end as rapid and as meaningless as your career on anylit. You deserve to be on this site as much as anyone else. And if you can't see this, than that is too bad and I feel sorry for you. I know that you will read this and think completely opposite of what I want you to think, like you always do....and that is fine. Whatever you may feel towards me right now is FINE. Just know one thing: I consider you a friend. And if one of my friends is uncomfortable being here on anylit, than I am uncomfortable too. That being said, I shall now announce to you all the end of JDcool. For I am leaving.
Jennifer |
Re: this is the fin (Score: 1)
by Missy on Thursday, April 07 @ 16:42:08 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | This was written good as usual, but this whole thing between peoples different opinions and everything shouldnt even be happening. Respect of others opinions and ideas is needed at this site, there are so many different kinds of people who write, learn to except different views and opinions instead of being so hot headed and offesensive. The whole thing here has just really ended up being pathetic and dumb, all cause there wasnt much use of respect of anothers viewpoint or of just leaving it alone, but had to keep at eachothers throats. Brian, you write well and hope you keep writing, hopefully you will get over this little thing and see that you can still write and post at this site.
-Melissa |
Re: this is the fin (Score: 1)
by BrianKeith on Friday, April 08 @ 06:24:48 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Well I really dont care about what you do JEN OK thats one For 2 I give a fuck less how peaple see me now I tryed to leave here peacefully but Im back because of a mysterious comment on ONLY I
Well do what you wish Jen so you dont want nothing to do with me now that IO left fine I see how it is I THINK WE NEED TO TALK. |
Re: this is the fin (Score: 1)
by zesta on Friday, April 08 @ 16:49:18 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | this is good and yes fuck bush |
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