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: A Suicide Note (pleaz comment)
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on Tuesday, April 12 @ 17:59:57 UTC
Incoherentgirl writes:: "
I'm ending my life
I wanna die
Nothing can change my mind
This time...
By the end of the night
All you will find
I s a torn body
That you hope isn't mine
You'll drop to your knees
and you'll start wondering
Why
This mangled body
Just had to be
Mine. "
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Re: A Suicide Note (pleaz comment) (Score: 1)
by stillgogo (stillgogo@cs.com) on Tuesday, April 12 @ 21:59:03 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | hoping this is just a poem if not please take a moment to read stainless steel pain.....its about the night of a friends life comeing to a end, the people that were there and the hell it was for all...its one of my poems i have posted...other then that the poem it self is good and seems like a cry for help but well writen....k/w penny |
Re: A Suicide Note (pleaz comment) (Score: 1)
by sbsms8 (sam_benson14@hotmail.com) on Tuesday, April 12 @ 22:15:31 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | alright i like it as a poem itelf but it almost seems like it ends to abruptly...and iknow everyone says this but i hope it's just a poem and not a serious thing...keep writtin
-sam |
Re: A Suicide Note (pleaz comment) (Score: 1)
by MikeIke (mikeike_17@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, April 13 @ 03:00:40 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Hey
I'd like to share with you a short story:
My best friend was named Travis. He came from a broken family, his dad beat him and his mother let him live with no restraint. Travis wasn't the best in school, nor was he athletic, but he was a good man; a steadfast friend.
One day in high school my parents told me that I was no longer allowed to hang out with Travis... that he was a bad influence and destined to become nothing. I fought my parents, and after nights of screaming and yelling I began to no longer hang with Travis.
A few months went by and I lost touch with him, then one day after work on a hot summer's day I got a phone call from an old friend. I was told that Travis had killed himself and that his funeral would be in a few days.
While at the service I saw every relative and friend mourning his death. I have this image in my head of his parents balling into their hands and all of his friends wishing they could make it better. Whenever I feel suicidal I think of that picture, how much pain his death caused.
Who knows, maybe you want to get back at someone by proving a final point, or perhaps you feel as though you have no out. Just please, talk to someone, a friend, a hotline, anything. People won't push you away if you ask for help, keeping suicidal thoughts a secret makes them that much stronger.
There isn't a day that goes by when I don't miss Travis, his stupid jokes and random nature. I think about my being alive, and his crooked smile. I still cry when I hear one of his jokes or once-regular comments. I feel guilty for his death, and for that I feel obligated to never forget him.
Let the small things keep you alive. A beautiful person giving you a friendly smile. The random stranger who gives you a compliment. The great weather, who knows. Whatever gives you joy, find those things, and realize that in a few years this will all seem as nothing, and your real life will begin.
Keep writing, I have found it one of the best outlets to keep myself balanced. We use these annonymous tags that no one can ever pin to our real-life identities... we're all equal here, and we all care.
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Re: A Suicide Note (pleaz comment) (Score: 1)
by Swe3tSorr0w (V0lleyballchic13@hotmail.com) on Monday, June 13 @ 23:14:17 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://freewebs.com/Larachristine | I rlli like it, itz a good poem, right to the point.. though i RLLI hope it isnt true for you.. I know everyone says it but really you have alot of people who care about you
~ L |
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