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: I COULD KILL YOU, I REALLY COULD
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on Monday, April 18 @ 13:33:06 UTC
maria writes:: " HE CAME ROUND MY HOUSE,
HE SAW US IN BED, HE SAW THE SCRATCH MARKS,
ON THE BACK OF YOUR HEAD,
OOH WE HAD A GOOD TIME, LIKE WE SAID WE WOULD,
BUT NOW I COULD KILL YOU, I REALLY COULD,
YOU TOLD ME YOU NEEDED ME, YOU WANTED ME SO BAD,
YOU SAID I WAS THE BEST LOVER, THAT YOUVE EVER HAD,
BUT NOW THAT IV LOST HIM AND STUCK HERE WITH YOU,
NOW I WANT TO KILL YOU, I REALLY REALLY DO,
YOU DIDNT EVEN FORCE ME, YOU TOLD ME A FEW LINES,
BUT ALL IT TOOK WAS A SELECTION OF FINE WINES,
AND I BROUGHT THEM UP, I FILLED YOU WITH DRINK,
I STRIPPED OFF MY CLOTHES, BEFORE YOU COULD BLINK,
HE WASNT ON MY BRAIN, I NEVER GAVE HIM A THOUGHT,
THATS WHY THE RISK WAS SO BIG NOW WEVE BEEN CAUGHT,
YOUR A TYPICAL MAN, YOU CAN NEVER SAY NO,
NOW I HAVE LOST HIM, I NEED TO TELL YOU TO GO,
I HOPE THAT SOON HE'LL BE HERE LIKE HE SHOULD,
COS I COULD KILL YOU NOW IV LOST HIM, I REALLY COULD..
"
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Re: I COULD KILL YOU, I REALLY COULD (Score: 1)
by waterlotus on Tuesday, April 19 @ 22:55:13 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Holy crap...you need a hug? Great poem though, love the repitition |
Re: I COULD KILL YOU, I REALLY COULD (Score: 1)
by Ravenloft (devinouis@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, April 20 @ 15:53:41 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | There needs to be something made clear here - that is not the typical man. He is the type of man that is on the News or scattered about in gossips because no one likes talking about nice people or wonderful people, especially no one likes hearing "Oh my husband is the best man" - that's almost confrontational to women. No, he's not the typical man - he's an asshole, make no mistake, and men are not naturally asses. The typical man... perhaps he's the one that caught you, and now he's not so typical. At any rate, whether there's validity to or it not, interesting write and for once, all caps did the poem good. Haha.. nicely done. |
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