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on Monday, May 02 @ 16:50:43 UTC
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: Sin of the Heart
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on Monday, May 02 @ 16:50:43 UTC
GracieLou writes:: " Most of what I write is pure fantasy
I struggle to find the light in this reality
The longing for a soul mate so strong I can’t comprehend
You came to me when things seemed bleak
My secret lover, not a dream conjured by a broken heart
You have become a maddening itch, just out of reach to scratch
The memory of your kiss upon my lips and the feeling of your body next to mine
Hearts beating in unison, with the world a distant memory
Never has this withered soul felt such passion
I gave to you my heart and body without a single question
To express these feelings openly would surely ruin lives
What have I done, this sin that felt so right
To relive our moments in my head causes me to blush
But you must realize that you saved me from a fall
Pulled me back from the edge of the abyss and kept me sane
Only time will tell if the path we take is right
For now you are my secret lover and now I turn out the light.
"
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Re: Sin of the Heart (Score: 1)
by GracieLou (goodnight_gracie2@yahoo.com) on Monday, May 02 @ 16:58:40 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Any comment here is appreciated! |
Re: Sin of the Heart (Score: 1)
by Dhruv on Tuesday, May 03 @ 14:17:27 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | wow... such power, and such intensively vast vocabulary... its amazing =)
dhruv |
Re: Sin of the Heart (Score: 1)
by GracieLou (goodnight_gracie2@yahoo.com) on Wednesday, May 04 @ 09:12:01 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Thank you all for your comments. They are appreciated by this poetess who is searching for her own style!! I was trying not to rhyme and was hoping it would turn out understandable. |
Re: Sin of the Heart (Score: 1)
by syloss (syloss1@yahoo.com) on Sunday, May 15 @ 05:37:06 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | The flow of this work is outstanding. The feeling of the story consumes the readers leaving us wanting more.
-James- |
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Poem's Rating
Average Score: 4.33
Votes: 6
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