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on Tuesday, May 03 @ 13:54:09 UTC
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: lord
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on Tuesday, May 03 @ 13:54:09 UTC
debu206 writes:: " dying and crying ,
both at the same time,
want to kill you eat u but im nauseous,
fell down , fell bad,
no support to hold ,
ur molest me mentally ,
you dont leave me to my seperate misery,
god forbid,
im lying -morbid,
im sick of this hunger,
materialiistic son of a bitch,
i am lost,
tell me the way u motherfucker,
dont know what to do,
what the fuck i am just a fool,
derive inspiration,
from my hesitation,
painful hate ,
someone ate
my own fire ,
somewhere the lies the lyre,
wanna kill you ,
melt you,
eventually see you smile.
i just hate you particularly your face ,
i particulary dont like you,
i particularly despise you,
i particularly want to cry ,
because i want to see you die,
i am hollow,
no soul,
want to sit and cry,
no time for bullshit anway "
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Re: lord (Score: 1)
by Dhruv on Tuesday, May 03 @ 13:57:11 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | so... fresh, and inventive,....
nice work!
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Re: lord (Score: 1)
by BodhiTree (burningbright2@aol.com) on Tuesday, May 03 @ 19:47:13 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | this is the shit, you broke quite a few barriers with the english language and propriety in this, well done, i would just suggest watching typoes...they didnt seem purposeful(or were they?)
I enjoyed this, emotional, raw, and fresh.
keep it up
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