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on Wednesday, May 11 @ 15:09:35 UTC
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: I hate my body
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on Wednesday, May 11 @ 15:09:35 UTC
jazz writes:: " My shell,
the fibres of my being,
the life that supports my mind,
the food that feeds my brain,
yet my body and i are so detatched,
in different dimensions,
yet caught in the same hell,
my body is my pain,
my trauma,
my madatory torture,
the hatred i feel for my body overides me with anxiety and anger.
every time i see it i burst into tears,
if gods hands were to pass over every womans silk curves,
he would have missed me,
if he were to cure every womans skin,
he would have poisoned me,
and unlike a flower blooms in the day and closes in the night,
my body is wrapped and hiden in clothes in the day,
never to be seen except for when bathed,
and bathing is this my pains gaulish muse,
and subconciously escaped from at night,
i am not ugly,
as i am a beautiful person in my mind,
i am not fat,
i just look at pictures of perfect women in magazines and think,
why dont i look like that?,
why cant i just be normal like everyone else?
and of course,
where are the spots on their bums!?
Jazz
HELP
"
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Re: I hate my body (Score: 1)
by BodhiTree (burningbright2@aol.com) on Wednesday, May 11 @ 20:53:23 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | How can you love you yourself if you cant love the physical part as well? dont ever compare yourself to meat headed models, they arent real and those pictures even more fake! I used to do the same thing and im probably still somewhat comparing myself to plastic photos, however i have realized my body is beautiful no matter what magazines and TV boast.
if this is just a imagined subject then you captured the feelings and emotions quite well.
oh and you spelled detatched wrong it should be detached...its a common mistake i sometimes do it myself when im extremely tired. oh and watch out for typos.
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Re: I hate my body (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Sunday, May 15 @ 06:09:20 UTC | i like your poem. i feel like that sometimes. i can't say all the positive stuff about not feeling it coz that doesn't work and i still hate myself.
but itz a good poem.
good good poem. |
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