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Posted by
on Monday, May 16 @ 14:49:33 UTC
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: The Killing Moment
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on Monday, May 16 @ 14:49:33 UTC
jazz writes:: " just one moment,
a single second flashes between the two extremes,
the emotions rush to my heart as i sence fear and pain in the atmosphere,
in the blur and haze of my sence's confusion,
her figure came crashing towards me,
moving with such speed and strength,
she was fuelled with adrenalin and pain,
she threw herself into my arms,
as her body gave way beneath the force of her mind,
her tears emploded from her eyes like acid eating through balsa wood,
she neuroticly screamed,
her devestation and distress cut through me,
ripping into me,
shock seized me by the throat as i saw her thick stage makeup run like water through mud,
disapearing to show the helpless innocent woman i have loved for years,
expossed and helpless to this anxiety,
this dangerous pressure,
destroying her second by second,
she was the star,
the star of the show,
a nightclub full of millionaires who had travelled to see her dance in her whore courture,
a single man had ripped the heart out of her chest and beat her with her paranoia,
had created a second voice to kill away the sanity,
all was left was this body,
the body she used for money,
the body that created the star,
it was all i heard from her white noise screams,
the only words i understood was,
'the invester''
i clentched her arms so tight i felt the blood desperately trying to relieve her body from the panic,
i felt it thrash through her veins like trojan horses,
i was helpless,
and in the heat of her flame,
she screamed to me 'i killed the investor, he tried to rape me, he tried to kill me, im not a whore, im not a whore!! i dont want to sell my body anymore, i cant do it, i cant cope, ive killed the investor!'
i knew from that moment her life as the star was over,
the nightclub was over,
a man was dead,
we had to escape...
Jazz xxxxxx "
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Re: The Killing Moment (Score: 1)
by Missy on Monday, May 16 @ 20:26:30 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I liked this, good imagery and brings the reader in. Was written well.
-Melissa
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