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: The Only End I See
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on Tuesday, May 17 @ 12:13:37 UTC
corruptedspirit writes:: " As I sit staring into space,
My thoughts distant and hard to trace,
I think of my life that’s so far past,
I’m not the first to wish death, and won’t be the last,
I can see no way round this bind I’m in,
No matter what answer I never win,
My thoughts are beginning to overwhelm me,
Is there a way out? If there is someone help me,
My love life has come to an abrupt halt,
I can’t help but think it’s all my own fault,
My life continues to spiral down,
The smile I once had, replaced by my frown,
I need a way out from this black hole,
To be able to wear my smile again shouldn’t be an unreachable goal,
As soon as I get one small break,
Something bad is sure to follow and make my world quake,
The people around me I now start to push away,
Can’t handle them seeing me slip further day by day,
I can’t take my problems to them, they have their own,
All the chances I’ve had in life, somehow blown,
Now I’ve found the way to escape from it all,
Jump in a wooden box, and take that six foot fall.
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Re: The Only End I See (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, May 17 @ 13:54:50 UTC | WOW.
I love your name, and I love this poem to death. I think that it is so unbelievably detailed and meaningful and holy crap....i love it. the first thing that drew me to you was your sense of grammer and spelling. So perfect and clean....so completely awesome. I am now considered a huge fan of yours. well done. Take a bow man!
Jen |
Re: The Only End I See (Score: 1)
by Missy on Tuesday, May 17 @ 21:54:24 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Really liked this! alot of emotion used, great flow and form. I can really relate and this was put together very well. loved it.
-Melissa |
Re: The Only End I See (Score: 1)
by CorruptedSpirit (BiteMeFreakz@aol.com) on Wednesday, May 18 @ 00:59:55 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | Thanks for your comments, everyone who writes likes to know that people enjoy reading their work. I consider this to me one of my best so far, but if anyone finds fault anywhere i'd also like to know, as it is these comments that helped me to get this far with my poetry.. I look back at some of my pieces that i wrote first and laugh, but they only got better because of the people on this site, for that i wanna thank everyone for their comments in the past... Elinor, you were probably my harshest critique, Special thanks to you and i am waiting for your comments on these piece =o) |
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Average Score: 4.62
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