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Reflective
Posted by on Tuesday, May 17 @ 21:08:30 UTC

: Lost Love
on Tuesday, May 17 @ 21:08:30 UTC
missy writes:: " Love use to fill
the emptyness in me
it captured my soul
freed my spirit
made me who I am
my love was my best friend
but time
allowed it all to be lost
I fell from a high
to an incredible low
my hopes were gone


I was given the bitter taste
of that feeling of betrayel
the feeling of
someone else being there
when I couldn't be
there is so much pain
to know I never could really be there
to give the presence
of something special
living away
from the one I loved
I could not control
I couldnt give everything
that he needed
but no matter
how far I was
I was there
still giving all of me
there was that moment
in my life
I felt a deep love
and cherished it
he gave me so much
who he was
everything about him
I loved
but now its all gone
he left me behind
and its been so long
but im continuely haunted
by the one I loved
there is anger
there is pain
there is longing
there is loss
even through so much
I know I will always care
he left a piece of him
with me
how I hope
in some way Im always with him
I know he moved on
but I am here
left trying
pushing to leave my past behind
when you care so much
it is soo hard
to leave everything behind "


 
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Re: Lost Love (Score: 1)
by CorruptedSpirit (BiteMeFreakz@aol.com) on Wednesday, May 18 @ 01:04:27 UTC
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I rarely comment on pieces, but i have to say i connected with this one. Felt every word, it kind of relates to the situation i'm in too. It's hard to let go of someone who you love so dear. Keep writing from the heart, this is a great piece =o)


Re: Lost Love (Score: 1)
by loveislikepainonarainyday on Saturday, August 20 @ 20:30:26 UTC
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wow i really connected with this one!! great great great job. i feel the same way. its hard to let go!

can i use this for an aim away message? i will be shure to put that it was by you and a like to this poem. please write back soon!

please comment and vote on my poems too!


 
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