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: A Man That Must Not Cry
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on Wednesday, May 18 @ 01:21:58 UTC
corruptedspirit writes:: " All these feelings I’ll keep locked inside,
Won’t let the tears fall from my eyes,
I hold them till they fester into rage,
Then break someone’s face and turn the next page,
Once my feelings have been cured,
Into that trap again I’ll be lured,
A never ending cycle of torment and pain,
All because I can’t let my tears flow like rain,
I’m a man that can’t express the sadness inside,
And I know that the urge to cry I must hide
If I ever muster a tear,
I criticise myself for not neglecting the fear,
That sign of weakness I shouldn’t show,
I release with a crushing blow,
Then it all feels better for a short time,
I am a man and to cry is a crime!
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Re: A Man That Must Not Cry (Score: 1)
by BrianKeith on Wednesday, May 18 @ 08:18:05 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I appload you for this poem. This is exactly how I am. Crying is a crime I like that. Yeah I was taught that real men never cry and that crying is for the weak. So becomes very very hard to shead even a tear you know. Well I hope that I like yourself learns the abilty to cry one day. Very very exellent
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Re: A Man That Must Not Cry (Score: 1)
by JDcool (jdcool038@yahoo.com) on Wednesday, May 18 @ 09:01:59 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | You are like the male version of me and Missy! LOL.
I can always tell your poems because at the end you always leave with a bang for the last sentence and end it with an exclamation point!!!! Nice poem, of course and I can't wait to read more!
Jen |
Re: A Man That Must Not Cry (Score: 1)
by Missy on Wednesday, May 18 @ 12:26:16 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | lol, yeah i guess you are the male of version of me and Jen. I really liked thsi, good feeling put into it. Written well. always keep writing.
-Melissa |
Re: A Man That Must Not Cry (Score: 1)
by EsaLoca21 on Wednesday, May 18 @ 15:07:49 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | HOTT!!! Datz all I got 2 say....HOTT!!!!!
ESA LOCA!! |
Re: A Man That Must Not Cry (Score: 1)
by MusicalPoet on Thursday, May 19 @ 00:09:00 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | | So good! I love this one. Excellent job of portraying the struggle in men today between being what people call either "tough" or a "wuss". Good write, keep it up. |
Re: A Man That Must Not Cry (Score: 1)
by Ifebuche (ifebuchede@yahoo.de) on Saturday, May 21 @ 15:38:32 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) http://www.ifebuche.jeeran.com | | Those of us who have cried and are not willing to cry one day will continue to miss something man or woman. When one cries it takes away some sorrow and brings some mellow. if i were the write i would end not "a crime" but "a gwan" |
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