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: The Trust Is Gone, But The Pain Still Continues
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on Tuesday, May 24 @ 12:23:00 UTC
corruptedspirit writes:: " As I wither once again into the darkness of my soul,
Stare back at my life that’s past and realise I’m losing control,
I find myself getting further away from everyone that cares,
They all seem fake, and when my back is turned I can feel their glares,
I need the power to restart my life from the womb,
It’s the only way out I can see from this impending doom,
My eyes currently blinded to foresee any light from a future source,
All I can see is a future of hatred and remorse,
I’ve tried to change my vision but to no avail,
There is no presence of my holy grail,
Sorrow and loneliness have become my closest allies,
The only feelings that stick with me through my demise,
There is one single point that turned my life into this spiral of ruin and hate,
The more I look forward, the more I see the inevitable checkmate,
For she ripped my heart from my body and failed to return my lifeline,
I just wish she had returned it so my life may retain some of the sunshine,
But she keeps it much to my dismay,
She likes to hold on, she likes to play,
The betrayal she inflicted upon my soul,
Will leave me forever alone in this hellhole,
The trust now lost, never to be regained,
My power to feel completely drained,
So I’ll cease all hope now of meeting anyone to love,
As she was the only gift offered from above,
The nights of endless thought and wonder will continue to plague my life,
Forced to live in my world of self pity and strife,
The end of my reign should soon rear its head,
If I can’t restart my life, I think I’ll be better off dead!
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Re: The Trust Is Gone, But The Pain Still Continues (Score: 0)
by Anonymous on Tuesday, May 24 @ 14:05:55 UTC | | I wonder how you got 36 hits same day within 12 hours of posting! People reading themselves here!!!? |
Re: The Trust Is Gone, But The Pain Still Continues (Score: 1)
by CorruptedSpirit (BiteMeFreakz@aol.com) on Thursday, May 26 @ 07:55:15 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | Perhaps people read it that many times? I have been coming on this site for longer than i can remember, and people now know my work and will read it when posted.
Same as me i will read the pieces from people i am use to when i come on here, you really think i have time to come on here and read my piece over and over again you fool? I am lucky if i have time to write anything at all, let alone get to post it on this site, so think before you make idle pathetic attempts at belittling me, anyway this just sums up the caliber of this site, so fuck it, i'm off to a site where i am appreciated, where only writers go, not idiots trying to draw attention away from my work with thier own pathetic attempts at a personnal attack, so farewell all, i'll return when the trash has been cleared out!
Danny |
Re: The Trust Is Gone, But The Pain Still Continues (Score: 1)
by GracieLou (goodnight_gracie2@yahoo.com) on Thursday, May 26 @ 09:10:06 UTC
(User Info | Send a Message) | I think this is very good! I love what you write and I don't know who this anonymous is but they are posting absolute crap for comments. If they have a problem, don't come to the site!!!!! This is for poets who are expressing themselves through this art. I hate to see you go but completely understand.
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